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Bad influence in school
Bad habits are easier to learn, and hard to brake, than good ones! One time I was walking in school I saw some boys smoking behind school .I was amazed when I saw my cousin smoking with them. I think this is problem because they were smoking and my cousin was 16 years old and I didn’t see him smoking before .It happen like a disease between the students .It is very serious problem. It is not nice to copy the bad things like smoking and drinking .If the students if the don’t stop .it will take a big place to move between a students .It will be a big problem in the future .The cease the bad student in school, the parents not teach their children the true way .The school will have a bad gang, the student will have bad future, lost their money with bad things, some time they will change what the good student believe.
Some way to solve this problem is have the teacher work hard with a students and teach them about their life and what happen in future if they on same bad way. That help them to be good student in school .To work hard with them and to show them how school and college make the future. They can study what they want and work what they want .and teach them how they will get trouble. If they solve their problem it will help them and in future they can learn from their mistake.
another way help to solve the problem is if parents show more care for their children and safe them from a bad things .they have to see what their children doing .they should ask about their children in school and to see how she/he doing in classes the parents will be content about their children .all parents want to be their children to do best for great future.
third solution is giving seventh period to bad student the study who do not doing good in classes .to have extra time to work and get help from teacher. They will learn more about classes .they will see how other student come to school and study and do their work .school is not time to have fun all the time .they will have fun time if they work hard.
The bad influence in school which will influence other students think because the bad friend in school and the parents don’t take care enough .they should teach their children about bad things. i think the teacher have to work hard with the bad students.it is the best solution to the problem. If the teacher helps the students with the things will help them and important information about future in school, college, and jab
Food in Cafeteria
Almost every students eat lunch in the cafeteria at school. Sometime I hear from the other that says the food in the cafeteria is bad and they through their lunch away. I think something happen in the food and make they do like that. I believe it is very serious. I think the primary reason for the abundance of unhealthy foods in the public schools in lacking of funding for school meals. Due to the economic crisis schools are not getting enough money from the government to provide students better meals. Students think that most of the food in cafeteria aren’t tasty and more important. Eat unhealthy food with the lack of proper exercise, students will grow up to be unhealthy and have a big problem to learn.
Some way to solve this problem is make sure to conserve the food. They should conserve the foods in the refrigerator temperature. Beside that they must to cover all the food and all vegetable should be fresh. Because if they don’t conserve the foods good so almost students will be sick, diarrhea or looseness. The students would have a big problem because they need to feed their mind to think and work in classes.
Another way to help solve this problem is make sure students are eating healthy food. First, they have to buy fresh food from the other place but that place must prestige. After that, make sure ensure food safety in processing. Nutritious food is contributing important in to daily meals. This way is very important because it’s helpful a lot for healthy of students and provide the nutrition for student. However if the public schools are lacking of funding for school meals also affect the quality of the food.
I think the main cause of this particular problem is limit budget. Many schools are currently in need for more funding from the government. There for the best solution is the government needs to consider adjusting how they spend our budget so that schools could get more money. That gives schools a higher amount to improve cafeteria food.
I think students are eating healthy food is the best solution to this problem because It’s helpful a lot for healthy of students and provide the nutrition for students. When the food in cafeteria is bad students eat unhealthy food with the lack of proper exercise and will grow up to be unhealthy because the abundance of unhealthy food and lacking of funding for school meals.
School security is bad
One day I was leaving at school I saw some boys fighting. When fighting going on there is no security guard. All students feel uncomfortable some of them so scare and they leave school quickly. Some students who have 7Th per they disturbed. Some of them go to principal for complain . there is more fights at school, if that’s going on students start missing school and maybe school stander will be down .
I have one way to solve this problem if all teachers of school and principal too, they arrange a meeting about school security the first step to solve this problem all the students should wrote a application to all staff and principal, I think this is good solution of this problem because students will be feel comfortable in school.
I have second way to solve this problem teacher can help the students to live with peace and happily. I think this is the good solution too, students can learn how to live with peace.
I have another solution too, all the students can wrote a application for school security to head of school. The first step to solve this problem add more class to wrote a application to head of state. I think this is good solution too because the students can learn how to wrote application for school security to head of state.
When the school security is bad. Students do more fights because of security guard don’t their duty. I think students should wrote a application about school security to the head of school is the best solution to this problem because students can learn how to wrote a application to the head of school about school security is bad.
Lunch line
To fix the problem with the line at lunch, the school has to do more line and make bigger cafeteria.
Because cafeteria is smaller, and some student didn’t get lunch this solution is good
Because the student can get lunch
Did you know that every student who eats school lunches gets some part of their lunch paid by the government? Yes, really.
Free lunches for lowest income students are entirely paid by the federal government, School Lunch Program, run by your state’s Department of Education and the US Department of Agriculture (USDA). Reduced-price meals for lower-middle income students are partially paid for by the government. “Full price” meals, which most students receive, are also subsidized by the government, in order to keep the prices as low as possible. If they didn’t, you would pay twice as much for the meal as you do now.
The National School Lunch Program (NSLP) was established by Congress in 1946 because the country saw so many malnourished young men trying to enlist in the military during World War II. They couldn’t take them because they weren’t healthy enough.
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The Students Fight at School.
When I was at school I saw the students at Luther Burbank high school fight and the teacher come to stop the fight. The student was fighting because they like the same girl. Also the students were gangs. Do You Know Some One Like This? There are student at school that fight and they will get punish like suspended or detention. School fight is a problem that should be fixing because it makes the school look bad.
The teacher should help to solve the fighting problem. The teacher asks why they are fighting. This is good because the students will know that they will get trouble from the teacher.
The second solution is the teacher helped the student to know more rule about school. The students that are fighting will go to Saturday school to learned more rules. It is good because the student will know about there self that it not good students.
The third solution is they will get punish like suspended or detention .the teacher saw the students fighting. They will get the student detention after lunch time. It is good because the teacher make the students to stop fighting at school.
I think the teacher should help to solve fighting problem. When the teacher helps the students to solve the problem, students do more respect to the teacher.
CAHSEE
Imagine you don’t pay attention in the classes instead you play the cellphone all day.so you not pass the CAHSEE and you cannot graduate form the high school, and you will feel very sad. CAHSEE is a problem at school. There are several causes of this problem. They include too much reading, you don’t pay attention in class, and your English is bad. There are many consequences of this problem they include you cannot graduate form the high school, people make fun of you. If this problem is not solved then all these consequences will get worse.
One solution is to work hard in classes, first students would need to pay attention, do the homework and read more. This is a good solution because this kind of will help students prepare for the CAHSEE.
Another solution is taking it again, first students need to find the date, practice and wait for the CAHSEE day. This solution is kind of good because you have another’s opportunities.
Another solution is the teachers explain more about the CAHSEE, first talk more about the CAHSEE, explain in the class, and do CAHSEE exercise. This is a good solution because the teachers can help students too.
When you cannot pass the CAHSEE, you cannot graduate from the high school because you don’t pay attention the class. I think work hard in class is the best solution to this problem because you know how to solve the problems and prepare to the CAHSEE.
THE CAHSEE
Imagine you don’t pay attention in the classroom instead you play with your friends in the classroom. You don’t pass the CAHSEE and you will not graduate from high school. How will that make you feel? The CAHSEE is a problem at school. The questions are very hard; I don’t understand very well the English and too much reading. There a several causes of problem, they include, I will feel sad, not go to the college, I will not graduate from high school , there are consequences of this problem, they include get a f, not have jog job and not have a diploma.
A solution is the students learn more about the CAHSEE first the students can ask question about the CAHSEE, is the teacher not have a book about the CAHSEE, the students can ask a book about the CAHSEE . This is a solution because this will help prepare students to pass the CAHSEE.
Another solution is the students pay attention in the classes, first the students pay attention more in the classes, they cannot play in the classes and the teachers talk more with them.
Another solution is the students need practice more the English, first the teacher calls parents and asks if they have a computer and internet, if they do, the teacher sets up websites for students use. If they don’t have computer the teacher help then get it. This is a good solution because this will help to the students for learn better the English.
When the students not pass the CAHSEE not would a good job because they don’t have diploma, I think the students learn more about the CAHSEE is the best solution to this problem because this will help prepare to pass the CAHSEE
School dirty did you think schools in clean form your child? First the bathroom look bad and smell bad I sow allots gross things like classroom and cafeteria I was surprise when saw flies around garbage and all over the school, .I no feel good when I see nasty things school dirty is a problem at school the students are dirty there a several causes of this problem they include the people too leas they in not enough people to clean the school the students no help to clean the school there are many effect this problem the include students feel discourages students cloud yet batteries school cant be superbike by at distil .
One solution is the school need to hire janitor first pay for me people ton working in the school someone to talk the principal he need to watch have money in the school this is a good solution because principal look the school have money the principal need to talk the district, the student each truck the garbage talk the students don’t throw trash make signs and put them around the school ,more money for more hire janitor ask for more funding row district when district knows the no hair janitor they are going to give money .
When the school is to dirty the effect is they students could yet batteries the because the students no help to clean they school I think hiring more janitor is the best solutions to this more janitor will be able to clean that capes I think the solution is the school pay for more money people to working in the school problem because the school has in the school problem because the school has more employees the school appear
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CAHSEE
Imagine you couldn’t pass the Chasee you will feel bad because you can’t continue at the school and your dreams are going to crush and you will not get a good job. Students who cannot pass the Cahsee it’s the problem at the school. They don’t speak English very well or the Cashee is so much work and didn’t put attention in class, they can’t get good jobs, they don’t graduate from high school, they will work at the field. If this problem is not solved then all these consequences will get worse.
One solution is if you have only been in this country for 4 years or less you should not take the Cahsee. This is a good solution because you will learn more English for p ass the Cahsee . Another solution is read, write and talk everyday at home that will help you to know how write better and how talk with somebody. This is a good solution because it will help you to pass the Cahsee. The last solution is work hard in class and don’t distract at he class this is good solution because you need put attention to the class and getting ready for finally pass the Cahsee.
When students don’t pass the Chasee they will not get good jobs the cause is because they don’t know so mucho English. I think not making immigrants take the Cahsee is the best solution to this problem because they don’t know so mucho English ..
School starts too early
The time at school should starts early than now. First you need to talk with the principal. Second talk with a person in charge in time. And third write a prose .This is a good solution because the principal can change the time.
Students sleep earlier. First they need to practice to sleep earlier. Second they need to finish their homework first, and then they need to get to sleep. Third play less. This is a good solution because when you need to wake up in the morning you’re not late for school.
I think students should get an alarm clock. Firs ask your parents how to get an alarm clock. Second you need to wake on time. And third go to school in peace .This is a good solution because you can not be late for school.
Imagine you have not waked up in the morning and you are late for school. You’re going to school and you get detention for coming in too late.
There is several cause of this problem. Early start is a problem at school. Students want to eat at home because they don’t like the breakfast at school. Students want to sleep more, they are tire to wake up too early and they are tired to wake and to walk to school. There are many consequences of this problem. If this problem is not solved then all the consequences will get worse.
In conclusion I think to talk to the principal is the best solution of this problem because they should practice to sleep earlier.
The computer to slow
Imagine students using the computers and they have work to do and they have to finish the work and the computers are to slow. There a several of these problems that affect computers. The computers are too old and there are to many. Many computers with this problem s cause the students to not learn that much and they don’t finish the work. If the problem does not get solved, the problem will get worse.
One solution is to buy new computers. First find the person who has the power and talk to them and help them to get. This will be a good solution because it can be faster computer s.
Another solution is to buy the memory first find were they sell it And how much deist cuss and figure out how to get the money it is a good solation because it cod mac the computer faster another solution is connect to another network first ask witch network is biter and how much deist cuss and toll the person how have the power and toll ham that wen the students don’t finish the work and they don’t get credit and because the computer are to slow.
I think the best solution is to buy new computers because is faster and students can get crud it.
I remember when I enter Luther Burbank High School and my friend tell me about the CAHSEE and I feel bad because I don’t like algebra but when my friend tell me don’t worry be happy is only for the grade ten, eleven, twelve but right now I have a lot fear because I don’t pass the CAHSEE I’m in grade twelve and I will graduate and my mom is very angry with me.
CAHSEE is a problem at school there a several causes of this problem they include is a lot questions the only one CAHSEE and no is in different languages.
There are consequents of this problem they include effects like don’t graduate and the people feel bad and the parents were hungry.
If this problem is not solved then all consequents will get worse.
-One solution for this problem is work to much with the students and talk about the CAHSEE and latter tock to the teachers and the teachers help the students.
-The second solution is put the CAHSEE in different languages so students can understand because many students don’t speak English and this will increase CAHSEE scores.
-The third solution is to remove CAHSSE testing from graduation requirement because it is too much stress. More students will graduate from high school.
Do you usually smell something bad when you go around in this school? Do you see the junks and the garbage on the floors? Do you see the dirty bathrooms? What do you feel with them? You hate it, right? Every day, when you come to school, I’m sure you have to see a lot of chewing gums on the hall ways and the remainder foods were thrown around the garbage. I feel so angry and I think you too. All of them are the dirty school – the biggest problem that we knew.
So, why is the school dirty? The important cause that I know is the school only had a few people clean up the school. If I’m not wrong, there are three people. Another cause is students usually chew gums on the floors and the hall ways. And the cause that I always see in Vietnam and also in here is the students don’t follow the rule in the school. Lot and lots of reasons to the school dirty.
After all of those, what happen with people when they come to school? There are many consequences of this problem. To be certain, some people can get sick. Other people will feel unbearable. And students also feel discouraged when studying in the school. It’s really bad. Everybody can’t stand or sit at the foul-smelling places.
Standing in front of this situation, we must take measures to improve them. First solution, the people have to clean up the school harder, or we can call students (volunteers) make many poster to promote people to clean up the school together. It makes the school is fresher than now. Second, we can get more laborers. It will not have dirty dusts and garbage on the hall ways. Different way, also the last solution is put the rule for this problem in the school. Then, nobody throw the junks or the garbage or the chewing gums on the hall ways. But with a little bit of a problem, if this situation still goes on in this school, then those things will influence to our health so much.
When the school dirty, we can get sick, because people don’t clean up the garbage to show the way to germs grow so much. And I think put the rule for this problem is the best solution to this problem because it will make everybody, whole teachers, students and other people never make school dirty and we don’t need increase people to clean up for school, to save money. So, let’s keep our learning environment so fresh!
Imagine that you are a new student and you have to take the CASHEE test at your first time in the school. How do you feel when you take that test? Something you don’t know and you cannot pass, right? I feel sad and I think you too. So, CASHEE test is a biggest problem at school.
There is a several cause of this problem they include don’t study in English, don’t practice in project and they cannot do homework. Here are many consequences of this problem, they include cannot get their diploma, don’t have a good work, don’t get to go to college and they don’t have a good life in the future.
Below we will have some solutions for this problem.
First, students need to study more English, study more Math, write the essays and practice them. Let’s study every time and everywhere. This is good solution because when you study and practice more, you can take the CASHEE better, maybe excellent.
Second, I think the CASHEE test should be easier then now. This is good solution because it will not have a lot of people fail that.
Different from the causes above, part of students are so lazy. So, the solution for this situation is students have to study hard, no game, no Facebook, no movie,… to focus on learning. Most of lazy students really really like online to play a lot of games on it. So, the school should hold some small games for students. This is good solution because it helps them many skills to ready for the CASHEE test and take it well.
When students do not pass CASHEE, they don’t get diploma, because they don’t know more English. I think the first solution is the best solution because you can improve your English to ready for CASHEE test.
STUDENT’S DON’T PASS CAHSEE.
Imagine that you new students,and you don’t know everything but you have cahsee TEST. How so you feel to test something you don’t know? When you see CAHSEE book and a pencil in the front but you don’t it,how do you feel sad or happy? CAHSEE teat is a problem at school. There a several cause of this problem they include not do homework,not study writing English,and Snead to much on Facebook are many sequencing of this problem, they in slide don’t have a good word, not get to college,and not have the future.if this problem is not solved. Then all there senescence will get worse.
One solution pass CAHSEE. first students need study.read the book,and they need practice writing.this is solution a good because it come help they writing better.
Another solution more practice. Frist students practing English and math CAHSEE, talk with teacher, this is solution a good because it came help they go to college,and help they future to.
Another solution reading more. Frist they need tread everyday, and ask Smolensk help them. This is solution a good because students go to school everyday. And to listen teacher say.
I think the students need to study and harder this is the best solution to this problem because the students English will get better.their math will also get better. Many students do not pass the cahsee because they not speak enough English,and they don’t study hard.they don’t get a high school diplomata they also don’t to graduate because of this.
STUDENT’S DON’T PASS CAHSEE
Imagine that you new students and you don’t know everything but you have CAHSEE TEST. How do you feel to test something you don’t know? When you see CAHSEE book and a pencil in the front but you don’t it, how do you feel sad or happy? CAHSEE teat is a problem at school. They a several cause of this problem they include not do homework, not study writing English and need to much on face book .There are many consequences of this problem, they in chide don’t have a good word, not get to college, and not have the future. if this problem is not solved. Then all there consciences will get worse.
One solution passes CAHSEE. First students need study. Reading the book, and they need practice writing. This is a good solution because it come help they writing better.
Another solution more practice. First students practicing English and math CAHSEE, talk with teacher, this is a good solution because it came help they are go to college, and help they future to.
Another, solution reading more. Frits they need tread every day, and ask someone help them. This is a good solution because students go to school every day. And to listen teacher say.
I think the students need to study and harder this is the best solution to this problem because the students English will get better their math will also get better. Many students do not pass the chase because they not speak enough English and they don’t study hard they don’t get a high school diploma and they also don’t to graduate because of this.
Phuc Le
Have you ever visit a place that is very weird? I did and I will tell you about it.
February, 2012 when I first came to United States, everything was different. People in United States smell very good. I couldn’t speak English. When I came here all I knew was “Hi” and “Hello”
When I came here after a month I went to elementary school named Matsuyama and the school were very nice and when people talked to me, I couldn’t understand so people that spoke the same language had to translate for me, and the weather very cold and the time were different because the weather were cold I have to where a lot of jackets. The food at my school tasted very weird and I get use to the food every day.
I came to United States and ready for school and the weather was cold but I had to walk to school.
I couldn’t speak but I feel happy because my friends were very cool and nice I walked to my school then I saw my friend and he said “let walked together” and I said “okay” we went to the cafeteria and they gave me a burrito and my friends tell me to eat it because they said it very good and I took a mouthful and that surprise me because it very spicy and tasted very good.
At lunch we went to the cafeteria and they gave me the food name spaghetti it taste very weird because the taste very sour and the noodle are very weird and I went home and my mom made some food for me call spring rolls.
Back then I felt very sad because I couldn’t understand and eat their food and now I feel very happy because I can speak English and eat their food
How can we make the ecology better in the world?
One day I was going to Guadalajara to go through Ameca there is a factory sugar and I could see all the pollution that causes the environment and then then I started thinking that pollution harms the planet like US and we all have to look for alternatives for a better world.
The bad ecology in the world. There are many causes for this problem, they include pollute the air, pollute the rivers and they put chemicals to land. If the problem is no solved the world then has many contaminated animals.
One solution is the cars should be electric, the steps of this solution are the people buy those cars and don’t make car the effects the air, this solution is good because it help the ecology.
Other solution is the people don’t throw garbage, the steps are the people should be responsible and the people trash in the ride place, this solution is good because is better to the world and humans.
And other solution is the people cut less trees in the world, one step is that can be a law and other step is give punishment to the people who does, this solution is good because has more air in the planet.
The bad ecology has contaminated animals because the people don’t think well.
I think the people don’t throw garbage is the best solution to this problem because they don’t throw garbage they do less pollution.
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I liked several things about your essay. I liked the way you express you self because you try you best on the essay . I also like the solution for you problem
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That one day my friend didn’t do his homework and he has trouble for not doing his work. The problem is that they didn’t do their work in class. There are many cause for this problem. They included the work in class. If the teacher couldn’t help their student in class then student would not listen to their teacher or else they will not learn anything at all.
The solution 1 teacher should go around and check if anyone need help on their work. The step of this solution is that the teacher past out paper and ask each person at a time and see if anyone need help. Or go to each person in class and help them on their work. The pros of this solution (Why it is good solution) it’s good because it’s could get them smart and it could help them a lots. It’s a good idea to help them learn.
The solution 2 teacher should call home and talk to their parent. The step of solution the teacher should get their phone number first. Teacher call home and talk to their parent about what they do in class. Pros of this solution (Why it is good solution) so student can learn more in the class.
The solution 3 some student didn’t understand and did not ask for help from the teacher. The step of solution they don’t care about the works they have to do in class. They should ask the teacher to help them if they don’t know anything or don’t understand anything. Pros of this solution (Why it is good solution) this solution is good because if the teacher help them they’ll learn faster and better learning.
I think solution 1 is the best solution to this problem because if the teacher check and help their student they’ll be happy to learn and listen to their teacher.
I liked several things about your essay. I liked the way you express you self because you try you best on the essay . I also like the solution for you problem
I liked many things about your essay. I liked the solutions because is good learned about solutions. I also liked the best solution because we have to do it.
Wake up Everybody!!!
Have you ever gone to school so tired and angry that you want to scream at someone? High school kids don’t sleep well because they are using the phone until 12:00 AM, they work too late, or they play video games and they don’t go to sleep.
One solution to the problem is don’t work too late. The steps for this solution are talk to the boss or don’t go to work. This solution is good because you can go to sleep on time.
The second solution to the problem is don’t play video games too late. Step of this solution are parents can take the video games from the kids or have them play the games just one hour. This solution is good because kids can play the game just an hour and they will go to a sleep on time.
The third solution to the problem is don’t be on the phone too late. The steps for this solution is parents can take phone away from the kids. This solution is good because kids can go to sleep and they get the education that they need.
The problem is don work too late and the effect is they might get sick and the cause is they are on the phone until 12:00 AM. The effect is they fall to sleep and they don’t eat anything. The problem is they play video games too late. The cause is they don’t have control of the games. The cause is they are in the phone for many hours. The effect is they going to wake up late and they might fall to sleep on class. The best solution to this problem is not working too late is the best solution for solution because kids can go to sleep on time and be ready for school.
The corruption in Mexico
The corruption in Mexico is big problem a few years ago in my city a person kill somebody and him go to jail for 3 mounts and he come out like if nothing happen everybody knows that he pay to go out fast no body know how much he pay the effect is they don’t go to jail and wrong people go to jail.
One solution is to get the more pay the steps for this is to talk to the president and tell them the situation so he think about it and they don’t accept the cartels money
Other solution is if they accept the money the money they are go in to jail the steps for this investigate and if they got them they go to jail
Another solution is the newspaper they are try to get them when they are getting the money
I think the best solution One solution is to get the more pay the steps for this is to talk to the president and tell them the situation so he think about it and they don’t accept the cartels money
What is the animal abuse? It’s when the people hit or abandon animals. One day I was watching TV and I saw people, in the news, hitting animals just because they don’t like them, which make me feel really mad, so mad that I was cursing that people because I’m an animal lover and that is not fair, animal abuse is a big problem.
There are many causes for the animal abuse which includes: people think that they does not feel, they can’t defend themselves and because they can’t speak. The effects of this problem are that they will get aggressive, people going to throw them in the street, and they going to bite the people.
If the problem of animal abuse is not solved then thousands of animals going to still being abused.
One solution is cheer the people to give love to the animals the steps of this solution are talk to people about be a good person with the animals. The pros of this solution are if we tell the people to be a good person with the animals, people will think different about the animals.
The second solution is build a refuge to keep animals safe. The steps of this solution are call voluntaries and workers, buy material and build the refuge. The pros of this solution are that if we build the refuge, animals will be protected.
The last solution is make a campaign about the good that has an animal, the steps of this solution are that if we call people, make posters and make meetings and those things. The pros of this solution are that if we make the campaign people will support our idea.
I think that build a refuge is the best solution because if we build the refuge animals will be safe and happy.
I liked several things about your essay. I liked it because I like animals too, I really feel sad when i saw the people abuse the animals. I also liked it because animals will be safe and happy like you said.
In society has to face a big problem about structure and status of the women. Almost of everyday I see this problem that some people still not accept the women, some people look down the women. There are many cause for this problem they include think that all of the women must be like the some women they know, or some women may look down, bad habits on them, or someone taught them like that and etc… The effect of this problem are some women look down on them or other ones, some women bad habits and another… If some people look down women then life won’t be fair for women.
One of solution is teaching people not look down on women, Encourage people to not look down women. The steps of this solution are don’t let anybody look down on women, don’t teach anybody look down women. This solution is good because it will make this problem to below.
Another of this solution is do practice between women and men to equality. The steps of this solution are don’t think the man better than the woman, don’t select side between woman and man. This solution is good because it will fair for women.
The last solution is let honor women. The steps of this solution are don’t decide women just because you listened or heard from other one, don’t look down women just because how they look like. This solution is good because that women may not like you think.
When some people look down on women then they think all of women must be like some women they know because some women may look down on them or someone taught them like that.
The best solution is teaching people to not look down on women. It is best solution because they will remember.
Same people don’t speak
English
I am come in this country. and I don’t speak English and I don’t have good feel because I can’t speak English and this is so big problem for me I try every day to learn English in school some people don’t speak English is this a problem there are many causes for this problem they include . Different country different culture and cant well speak English. The effects of this problem community problems and don’t have good future and don’t have good job. Some people don’t speak English than they can’t support him family.
They first solution is they are learning English In the school. The steps of this solution learn English and remember some word and samurais the listen work the computer read some book pros of this solution is good. Because it increases your vocabulary and you can learn very quickly.
The second solution talk to parents for try everyday learn English. The steps of this solution is try to talk English with your home members and communicate with your neighbors and have contact and for with them. And chat in English with them. This solution is good it because
It makes your speak English .and boots up your English speaking.
The third solution is they are need to do homework every day for better English. The steps of this solution is they should perform their homework lave fully and constantly. This solution is good because it improve their grammar and writing skills. When some people don’t speak English than community problems don’t good future don’t have good job. I think to parents for try everyday learn English. Is the best solution to this problem because it makes your speak English and boots up your English speaking .
I liked several things about your essay. I liked your best solution because it make us speak English better. I also liked it because all of you is good.
It was one day I was so third and I had headache. Some students talked a lot in class about Some things and they did not listen the teacher I was so sad with them because they were not quietly. They have many causes for this problem. They include of different cultures, busy with him phones and they don’t know good English. The effects of this problem are don’t graduate, don’t pass grade and don’t be strong. And some student talking so much they will not be interested to come school.
The first solution is they should listen the teacher the steps of this solution are teacher talk with them, teacher ask them and teacher advise them. It is good solution because it is important in the class.
The second solution is teacher can call with him parents. The steps of this solution are call with him parents, talk with him parents and meet him parents. It is good solution because it is good way to you can control them.
The third solution is the teacher should always control all the students in the class. The steps of this solution are control them, say quite to students and do not let students to talk.it is good solution because it is good way to be quite students.
When students are so talking in class then students don’t be graduate, don’t pass grades because they are from different countries and they don’t know English.
The best solution is the teacher should always control students and asking them to be quite. It is best solution because it is good way to be quite students in the class.
YOU NEVER NEED THE CAR
Last night I’ need a car because I go to the shopping. The problem is people need have a car. There are many causes for this problem they include no many, no listen and do not have a job. The effects of this problem are people walk all people needs a car people feel sad because how to pay for a car, some people get a new car people they don’t have many to buy a car there all people feel sad because
Are need a car. Some people have a job some people they don’t have a job. The first solution people get the job to get many for a car. The steps of this solution is people get the job be carefully in the job do hard job. The pros of this solution because people be carefully in the job
The second solution first people learn to speak English and get the job. The steps of this solution learn English speak English talk to people. The steps of this solution because people to learn English and talk to people.
The third of the solution the government loan many help to people. The steps of his solution to talk meet to government then ask for. Many and get a lot’s of many. The pro of this solution because government get a lot’s of many.
somaya
I liked several/many/two/three things about your essay. I liked three because _it is good for school I also liked to have friends because you can be happy with your friend.
PROBLEM IN SCHOOL
Why are we go to school every day? Some stunted don’t want to go to school. Why? We can’t answer this question. To all parent of their children you have to push your kids to school, no matter what.
And how did you job this problem? Some stunted come to school and skip class and I don’t know why. But there are many way to make stunted stop doing this.
Right now it time to give you the cause of the problem. And I will give you three…….is they don’t really about what goanna happen in the future…..and they don’t want to their teacher…… and the last one is they don’t want to something.
There are many effect but I will give you three…… they don’t want to focus on school…….when they don’t know something they don’t ask the teacher…… Some stunted don’t want to go to school than the stunted will not even graduate from high school. They have to try harder and harder.
The first solution of this paragraph is…the teacher call parents of the stunted. The step is…. make sure that the number is right. Second solution is…sent the stunted detention room…tell the monitors to come and take the stunted. It is good, because it make the stunted listen to you.
Third solution is…take the stunted outside when the stunted don’t want to do something than talk to them or take them somewhere quietly. It is good because, may be they will try to not talking next time.
I think call the stunted parents it best thing to make the stunted stop. That all I know.
Mancy
I liked several things about your essay. I liked your best solution because they will stop. I also liked it because they will listen and go to school everyday.
How our country benefit from charity?
One day I say some people asking to donate some money for charity. But I say some people didn’t donate money for charity and some people donate money for charity. All people need to donate money for charity. There are many causes for this problem the include, the don’t want use his money for charity but some people don’t have money, the don’t think about the charity .The effect of this problem are the have
Few money. But the some people want donate money but they don’t have money the need work hard to make more money and spend for charity. If the people don’t give money for charity then the conquest is if you don’t solve this problem then the poor people suffer more.
One solution is the encourage people need to give money. The first Step is people don’t have lots of money to spend. Second step is people need to work hard. This solution is good because the people making money.
Second solution is the government tell all people work hard and making money and spend for charity. First step is but the people don’t like work hard. Second step is the government need to pay lot money. This solution is good because people tell government pay lot’s money.
Thread solution is the all people work hard the want make money. Step one is but the government paying few money. Second step is people making more money. This solution is good because the people spending money for charity.
When people don’t give money for charity then the poor people don’t exist for charity because people don’t have lots money.
I think the encourage people is the best solution to this problem because the people spending money for the charity and their country exist for charity.
Salma Hurtado
THE BOY FROM VIETNAM
In the story “rule and rulers”, the problem is when a boy arrived to America he came from Vietnam and he didn’t know the language and the culture. However the solution is when the teacher helped him about the culture and the English language.
I think that his classmates and friends have to give him help so he doesn’t feel sad.
My personal experience was when one day I was in the mall and I wanted to ask a person who works there where was the t-shirts spot and my cousin help me.
My observation is if I see someone who need help whit English or whatever I’ll try to help that person.
In the story at the last part Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy because she didn’t have that culture, but instead she helped him.
Sonia Chavarria
“Rules and Rulers”
The Story is about a boy that don’t speak English and he moved to America to a school, and his first day of class in accidentally he knocked the water on the floor and he scared because he think that the teacher yelled him, but the teacher helped him.
I think that is good because he felt better.
My personal experience is when I came to here in was to first day of class I feeling nervous because I don’t understand English.
One day I saw when Miss. Hoyos helped to the students.
In the story Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy. She helped him.
In the story, ‘Rule and Rulers’ the problem is he doesn’t understand English, the solution is the teacher helps.
I think this is a good solution because the teacher helps students.
My friend helps students in the story, Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy, she helped him.
Jose Gomez
Rules and Ruler
In the story Sam doesn’t understand English. The teacher help Sam to better English.
I think that is good solution because Sam understands what people say when they talk in English.
One day Ms. Alma helped me with my English like understand and speak and more. I watched Ms. Alma help to Felipe with his English. In the story Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy she helped him.
Salma Hurtado
“Monsy and Michelle”
The story is about two girls, Monsy and Michelle, Monsy think that prejudice is bad and she doesn’t like other people make fun of Michelle.
I am agree whit Monsy because she didn’t matter about if Michelle was a different race.
One day I was in middle school and there were a special person. He cries because nobody like him.
If we see someone who gets bullying, then you have to help them.
All people are equals no matter what they look like, that is that I understand in the story. The story said Michelle was the smartest student in class so don’t matter the culture to be intelligent or dumb. “Don’t judge a book for the cover”.
The story tell us that we have to respect the people no matter what.
In the story monsy and Michelle monsy Thinks that prejudice is bad she does not like other people Making fun of Michelle because I of her race.
I agree with monsy because she like other cultures.
Last year one day in the locker room some girl was Looking bad me just because I was I could not Speak English I was sad because I didn’t have friend.
through experience I learned that all people are some no
Matter what they look like Michelle was the smarter student in class Michelle was so happy I stood up for her that we became very good friend .
I think that people prejudice Michelle and that is very bad but when monsy talk to her she noticed that Michelle is so smart and a cool person .
Sonia chavarria
“Monsy and Michelle”
In this story “Monsy and Michelle” Monsy think that prejudice is bad. She does not like other people making fun of Michelle because of her race.
I agree with Monsy because she like other cultures.
Last year in my class of P.E some girls Mexicans were looking bad at me and they made me felt uncomfortable. They girls speak Spanish because they are Mexicans but she speaking in English and I don’t understand English.
The last year in my class of P.E to a girl cried because she no speak English, They make fun of her.
The story said “Through this experience I learned that all people are the same no matter what they like.” “Don’t judge a book for the cover page”
Abraham
Monsy And Michelle
In the story Monsy and Michelle, Monsy thinks that prejudice is bad, she does not like other people, making fun of Michelle because of her race.
I agree with Monsy that prejudice is wrong.
In my person experience I have people at my job that treal me bad because of my culture and the people no understand me.
From my observation I have family that experience prejudice and my family have a different culture.
In the reading Monsy sad ‘ I got so angry that one day I stood up in class and shoutxed at the others students.
In conclusion this is important because prejudice is bad.
In the story Monsy think that prejudice is dad. She does not like other people, making fun of Michelle because of her race. I agree with Monsy that prejudice is wrong In my personal experience, I have people at school that treat me poorly because I don’t speak English. From my observation my family is in Guatemala and struggle with
People being prejudice. In the reading Monsy said I got so angry that on day I stood up in class and
Shouted at other students In conclusion this is important because Monsy did thet raiht thing.
Salma Hurtado
El Salvador
In the story she think the problem is in El Salvador there are a lot of violent. The people who live there don’t want to take the bus because always robbed, and they are poor sometimes they have inability to put enough food on the table. The people of El Salvador run to U.S. but they had to across the desert then over to California.
I agree with the solution because in U.S. there are more opportunities but I am not agree because they have to shadows or separation from people they love but if they go to U.S. it’s going to be a great person.
One day when I was in Juarez, I was in smart store and there were a murder and I get scared I went with my sister and mother but they just robbed the store.
The political in El Salvador is really bad, they need laws to respect people and freedom for the violence and the bad people go to the jail.
The article said that more and more people choose to flee to de U.S. and that’s true because they say that in United States are very opportunities to be better.
I think that they have to put laws to quit al the violence. The people might to be freedom.
Elaine Denny she said that in El Salvador there are many gang.
She said the solution is come to the U.S
The problem with the gang and the police, the people come to the U.S because this country don’t have gang.
I agree because coming to the U.S is a good solution and a good thing.
From my personal experience that’s good, come to the U.S because here there are no problems and this country have good people.
From my observation here all is different culture and and the people is good and here is a good country.
From the reading ‘Murder rates driven by gang violence continue to rise, spiking 67 percent in 2,015 over the year before.
In conclusion, the gang is bad and it is no good live in the El Salvador.
Sonia Chavarria’s
El Salvador is now one of the most violent countries in the world. Here’s what it’s like.
Elaine Denny says the Salvador is now one of the most violent countries in the world for all delinquency, robberies and death. The solution of they is of go to the United State for a best life.
I don’t agree with the solution of them because the president need work for your country. The solution would that the president and government of the Salvador will them Salvadorans.
The last year my mother decided to leave her country for that in my country it had future, in Mexico there are very violence, robberies, death and delinquency. I and my mother we come to here for have a better life.
This year came so much people to U.S. from Salvador y Guatemala leave to all the violence of their country.
The article said that every time there is more crime and delinquency lees work and less support because more people are die the gang tied.
I think of this article that they need to have laws to improve their country.
The problems is when people fight in the school and they don’t have the control of the situation, a big now is that people fight in the school, the cause of this problem are and the people weiring in the school and the people think that they are famous when they fight in the school, the effect of people fight the cause a lot problems and I canget suspendect from the school.
The solution of the school has a good talk about problems the teachers talk with the parents the teacher talk with the students about the problems because is no good fight in the school.
Another solution is the family talk with the people and with the group and this is a good solution because the people the group understand the problem.
A third solution is the teacher pay more attention to the students the teacher pay attention to the group and the group reflect the problem.
The best solution is that teachers listen to the group because of the group will understand.
I remember when I could not and could not buy because I do not speak English. The big problem Is that I do not speak English. The cause are because I do not practice, when I arrive at my house I do not read books and I do not pay attention in class. The effects are if i’m lost I can hardly ask for help, I do not understand when the teacher tells me, they can not give me a job because I do not speak English. I will not become a good speaker.
One solution is practicing words and sentences with a friend. The first step is talk to a friend that can help. Second, set up a study day that my friend can helpi with my English. If help from my friend, then my English will get better.
An other solution is for me to read a lot of book. The first step is for me to go to the library. Second, I need to find a book that I will like. If I read more books, then I will learn new words.
My last solution is to use the computer or my cell phone. The first is to look for an online application. Then, I will use it to help me with my English. If I use the computer or my cell phone, then I could use the application I go.
I can hedly ask for help when I can not speak English, because I do not practice. I think practice words and sentences with a friend is the best solution to this problem because having conversation with my friend would be really great practice and it will help me learn English.
felipe lopez
Racism
I remember when I come here to united states and I remember my first day of class of P.E. there was two girl Mexicans and they speak English and Spanish, I needed help because I needed tell something to my teacher of P.E. an I said a the two girls Mexicans than I needed help, and they said “we don’t speak Spanish sorry” however they yes spoke Spanish but they not wanted to help me, they’re racist.
A big problem now is the racism. The cause of this problem are than people don’t like To recognize its origin and create more than others persons and because racism began too long time with the slaves and now it’s time want to try to have us as before but no longer can.
The effects of not reading at home are it can than people to get angry, to cause of that exist the violence here in united stated and triggers a network of problems, ranging from physical or verbal abuse, even death by revenge.
If the racism doesn’t stop then probably occur a big problem for all the country and possibly also all the world.
One solution is than everybody we can make awareness than racism is no good. The first steps are talk with all the persons of our family, friends in the school and in your neighborhood about than racism no is good. This a good solution because when we talked about than racism is no good.
Second solution is to create an international campaign in all school against racism. This idea is good step for we can stop racism, and we need talk about of this idea can starting in democracies schools.
Third solution is than the police can be trained to treat everyone the same, the police give ticket to the persons than are racist.
The best solution is than everybody we can make awareness than racism is no good. The first steps are talk with all the persons of our family, friends in the school and in your neighborhood about than racism no is good. This a good solution because when we talked about the racism is no good.
Tittle: Bad teacher
Who is the bad teacher for you? From my experience, I remember Ms. Juliana she screamed when I was doing my work. I told her to calm down. After that, Ms. Juliana screamed again at me a big problem now is because they self it’s crazy and I think too that is because they is not good for a teacher and they maybe don’t like work in the school.
The effects are we learn nothing and I was suspended from school and we can have a lot problem in class if bad teacher then the student is not learning.
One solution is talking with the principal about her problem the first step is talk with secretary of the principal, the second step is meet and talk, its good solution because I can help to my friends in the grades because the bad teacher put f in everything work of my friends the principal can talk with her problem.
Other solution is talking with the teacher and make an appointment and talk to her to let her know how I feel its good because you can save the work and help her to was good teacher
the other solution my mom call the principal the first step is call to my mom and I explain her what happened its good solution because her know what happened.
The best solution is talking with the principal and solve the problem because he is the boss.
Climate change
Do you know that the melting ice in the arctic due to climate change ? This is a big problem in the world. It is related to global warming. There are a lot of reason for this problem, but the big reason is pollution by human. Human need climate for living but they are destroying it slowly. If the problem isn’t solved, human would be dead because of air pollution and angry of nature like storm, earthquake, tsunami, etc.
My first solution is stop deforestation. Every year, 33 million acress of forest are cut down. The represent 20 percent of human made green house gas emissions and a source that could be avoid relatively easily. The amazon and other forest are not just the lung of the earth, they may also be humanity’s best short term hope for limiting climate change. I think it is a good solution because if the earth had no tree, human could be dead.
The second solution is local city action. In fact, cities around the world are reducing CO2 to the earth. CO2 make the earth polluted and make climate change. CO2 also make temperature high. In 200, six states in the northeastern US lauched a regional via the use of alternative sources and energy-efficiency programs. I think is it a good solution because if we don’t stop reducing CO2 we would have no 02 for living.
The third solution is stop littering public places. Littering will affect the environment and cause environmental pollution. That is because the lack of human consciousness. There are so many countries have lauched this solution like Singapore, Thailand, etc. I think it is a good solution because if we keep littering, the earth could be dead and we couldn’t live anymore.
So climate change is a big problem in the world. I think stopping deforestation is the best solution to solve this problem because everything in this world need 02 for living and 02 came from trees, trees can clean air and make animal and human living. If human destroy all trees in this earth, climate will be changed and became the end of the world.
How to Stop Fighting With Your Brother or Sister
It is a fact that they want to mess with you but you don’t want to mess with them and you hate it.You are the youngest of them and this is a problem because you hate being youngest instead of being older.If you see they are fighting each other then back away and go to your room,stay in there.
My first solution is that talk to your sibling and have serious talk.First,let them speak first and then you can talk when they are done talking.Then,he/she may feel obliged to fully listen to you when it’s your turn to speak.It’s best that you know what you’ve been doing wrong.It’s your own fault that start the fight and sibling cannot get along.
My second solution is that “we”means the two of you will work together on this.The two of you have to work together as a team and it has to be fair because whoever started first have to apologize and then the other apologize to them.If you feel that your relationship isn’t strong enough to handle two or three areas,stick to one if necessary.However,don’t procrastinate in handling the other areas.
My third solution is that you and your sibling will feel more supported and encouraged by each other.Don’t focus on the negative points.Rather,look past them.At least your sibling is striving to improve in that area.Focus on other area while maintaining the strong areas to make them even stronger.
Ask your parents for advice and see what they can do to help strengthen the relationship between you and your sibling.Do not tattle on your sibling and pin the blame him/her because that will show how immature your are.Plus,your sibling will feel hurt and that may worsen the conditions of your relationship with him/her.Do something nice for your sibling without reason.
Refugees
Where have the refugees? Where can the refugees go? UN figures show that more than 65 million people have been forced to leave their homes worldwide due to war and other factors, and 21.3 million of them are refugees. Where are other refugees go? This is a big problem, because the issue of refugee reception has triggered a series of disputes in many countries. If this problem doesn’t get fixed, then many refugees will die.
My first solution is refugee distribution programs in each country. This solution
including refugee’s residence, job, food, and school. This solution is good,
because it can help refugees to get a new life.
My second solution is termination of the Syrian war. Termination of the war
requires the support of other countries and help the Syrian government to solve
the problem of terrorist organizations. Because these refugees a lot from
Syrian.
My last solution is set up offices in Africa and the Middle East to deal with asylum applications. The president of the council of Europe, Tusk, called for “the setting up of reception in areas close to war to deal with all asylum applications”. Because this will help reduce people crossing and die in the Mediterranean illegally.
If we don’t fix refugee problem, the setting up of reception centers in areas refugee mortality will increase.I think termination of the Syrian war is a best solution, because it could prevent the number of refugees and many refugees can come back those country. Now the refugees number is increasing around the world, we should be doing something to help them and don’t looking on with folded arms.
What would you do if you need to go to college and you don’t have money to pay? 60 percent students can’t go to college because of money.
I think the good solution would be they should give the students more scholarship for college first they they should give them scholarship for college and second the student should have choices in choosing colleges any colleges they wanna go they should give them scholarship and finally since the students finished the colleges they can work in very nice place and a better job.
My second solution is they should give them money for lend second when they are going to college they should give them some extra money for books,foods,clothes, n stuff finally the students can go to college and they can choose any class they want.
My third solution is they should give them some money in finance second when the student take the degrees and since they start working students can pay the money every month finally every low class students can go to college and they can take any classes they want.
My best solution is the the ministry of education should support the students.And i think this is my best solution because the students can go to college and they get their degrees
Homeless person
Why homeless person don’t have house? Many homeless person in my country don’t have home because in my country don’t have a lot job and then people don’t have job they don’t have money pay for house.If this doesn’t get fixed, then they hard to sleep and they eat food not full because they don’t have money.
You fine job everything that you can do. first you need fine the job second you have a job you have money pay for house. this is a good solution you have home and you don’t sleep outside.
You need president help you. first the president come to help you and you have home you not hard to sleep outside.This is a good solution you have food and you don’t sleep outside.
Many homeless person need to write on paper and stay on sidewalk.The end homeless person have job have home you not to sleep outside and the kid can go to school.
Bad influence in school
Bad habits are easier to learn, and hard to brake, than good ones! One time I was walking in school I saw some boys smoking behind school .I was amazed when I saw my cousin smoking with them. I think this is problem because they were smoking and my cousin was 16 years old and I didn’t see him smoking before .It happen like a disease between the students .It is very serious problem. It is not nice to copy the bad things like smoking and drinking .If the students if the don’t stop .it will take a big place to move between a students .It will be a big problem in the future .The cease the bad student in school, the parents not teach their children the true way .The school will have a bad gang, the student will have bad future, lost their money with bad things, some time they will change what the good student believe.
Some way to solve this problem is have the teacher work hard with a students and teach them about their life and what happen in future if they on same bad way. That help them to be good student in school .To work hard with them and to show them how school and college make the future. They can study what they want and work what they want .and teach them how they will get trouble. If they solve their problem it will help them and in future they can learn from their mistake.
another way help to solve the problem is if parents show more care for their children and safe them from a bad things .they have to see what their children doing .they should ask about their children in school and to see how she/he doing in classes the parents will be content about their children .all parents want to be their children to do best for great future.
third solution is giving seventh period to bad student the study who do not doing good in classes .to have extra time to work and get help from teacher. They will learn more about classes .they will see how other student come to school and study and do their work .school is not time to have fun all the time .they will have fun time if they work hard.
The bad influence in school which will influence other students think because the bad friend in school and the parents don’t take care enough .they should teach their children about bad things. i think the teacher have to work hard with the bad students.it is the best solution to the problem. If the teacher helps the students with the things will help them and important information about future in school, college, and jab
Food in Cafeteria
Almost every students eat lunch in the cafeteria at school. Sometime I hear from the other that says the food in the cafeteria is bad and they through their lunch away. I think something happen in the food and make they do like that. I believe it is very serious. I think the primary reason for the abundance of unhealthy foods in the public schools in lacking of funding for school meals. Due to the economic crisis schools are not getting enough money from the government to provide students better meals. Students think that most of the food in cafeteria aren’t tasty and more important. Eat unhealthy food with the lack of proper exercise, students will grow up to be unhealthy and have a big problem to learn.
Some way to solve this problem is make sure to conserve the food. They should conserve the foods in the refrigerator temperature. Beside that they must to cover all the food and all vegetable should be fresh. Because if they don’t conserve the foods good so almost students will be sick, diarrhea or looseness. The students would have a big problem because they need to feed their mind to think and work in classes.
Another way to help solve this problem is make sure students are eating healthy food. First, they have to buy fresh food from the other place but that place must prestige. After that, make sure ensure food safety in processing. Nutritious food is contributing important in to daily meals. This way is very important because it’s helpful a lot for healthy of students and provide the nutrition for student. However if the public schools are lacking of funding for school meals also affect the quality of the food.
I think the main cause of this particular problem is limit budget. Many schools are currently in need for more funding from the government. There for the best solution is the government needs to consider adjusting how they spend our budget so that schools could get more money. That gives schools a higher amount to improve cafeteria food.
I think students are eating healthy food is the best solution to this problem because It’s helpful a lot for healthy of students and provide the nutrition for students. When the food in cafeteria is bad students eat unhealthy food with the lack of proper exercise and will grow up to be unhealthy because the abundance of unhealthy food and lacking of funding for school meals.
School security is bad
One day I was leaving at school I saw some boys fighting. When fighting going on there is no security guard. All students feel uncomfortable some of them so scare and they leave school quickly. Some students who have 7Th per they disturbed. Some of them go to principal for complain . there is more fights at school, if that’s going on students start missing school and maybe school stander will be down .
I have one way to solve this problem if all teachers of school and principal too, they arrange a meeting about school security the first step to solve this problem all the students should wrote a application to all staff and principal, I think this is good solution of this problem because students will be feel comfortable in school.
I have second way to solve this problem teacher can help the students to live with peace and happily. I think this is the good solution too, students can learn how to live with peace.
I have another solution too, all the students can wrote a application for school security to head of school. The first step to solve this problem add more class to wrote a application to head of state. I think this is good solution too because the students can learn how to wrote application for school security to head of state.
When the school security is bad. Students do more fights because of security guard don’t their duty. I think students should wrote a application about school security to the head of school is the best solution to this problem because students can learn how to wrote a application to the head of school about school security is bad.
Lunch line
To fix the problem with the line at lunch, the school has to do more line and make bigger cafeteria.
Because cafeteria is smaller, and some student didn’t get lunch this solution is good
Because the student can get lunch
Did you know that every student who eats school lunches gets some part of their lunch paid by the government? Yes, really.
Free lunches for lowest income students are entirely paid by the federal government, School Lunch Program, run by your state’s Department of Education and the US Department of Agriculture (USDA). Reduced-price meals for lower-middle income students are partially paid for by the government. “Full price” meals, which most students receive, are also subsidized by the government, in order to keep the prices as low as possible. If they didn’t, you would pay twice as much for the meal as you do now.
The National School Lunch Program (NSLP) was established by Congress in 1946 because the country saw so many malnourished young men trying to enlist in the military during World War II. They couldn’t take them because they weren’t healthy enough.
Her,Yer
The Students Fight at School.
When I was at school I saw the students at Luther Burbank high school fight and the teacher come to stop the fight. The student was fighting because they like the same girl. Also the students were gangs. Do You Know Some One Like This? There are student at school that fight and they will get punish like suspended or detention. School fight is a problem that should be fixing because it makes the school look bad.
The teacher should help to solve the fighting problem. The teacher asks why they are fighting. This is good because the students will know that they will get trouble from the teacher.
The second solution is the teacher helped the student to know more rule about school. The students that are fighting will go to Saturday school to learned more rules. It is good because the student will know about there self that it not good students.
The third solution is they will get punish like suspended or detention .the teacher saw the students fighting. They will get the student detention after lunch time. It is good because the teacher make the students to stop fighting at school.
I think the teacher should help to solve fighting problem. When the teacher helps the students to solve the problem, students do more respect to the teacher.
CAHSEE
Imagine you don’t pay attention in the classes instead you play the cellphone all day.so you not pass the CAHSEE and you cannot graduate form the high school, and you will feel very sad. CAHSEE is a problem at school. There are several causes of this problem. They include too much reading, you don’t pay attention in class, and your English is bad. There are many consequences of this problem they include you cannot graduate form the high school, people make fun of you. If this problem is not solved then all these consequences will get worse.
One solution is to work hard in classes, first students would need to pay attention, do the homework and read more. This is a good solution because this kind of will help students prepare for the CAHSEE.
Another solution is taking it again, first students need to find the date, practice and wait for the CAHSEE day. This solution is kind of good because you have another’s opportunities.
Another solution is the teachers explain more about the CAHSEE, first talk more about the CAHSEE, explain in the class, and do CAHSEE exercise. This is a good solution because the teachers can help students too.
When you cannot pass the CAHSEE, you cannot graduate from the high school because you don’t pay attention the class. I think work hard in class is the best solution to this problem because you know how to solve the problems and prepare to the CAHSEE.
THE CAHSEE
Imagine you don’t pay attention in the classroom instead you play with your friends in the classroom. You don’t pass the CAHSEE and you will not graduate from high school. How will that make you feel? The CAHSEE is a problem at school. The questions are very hard; I don’t understand very well the English and too much reading. There a several causes of problem, they include, I will feel sad, not go to the college, I will not graduate from high school , there are consequences of this problem, they include get a f, not have jog job and not have a diploma.
A solution is the students learn more about the CAHSEE first the students can ask question about the CAHSEE, is the teacher not have a book about the CAHSEE, the students can ask a book about the CAHSEE . This is a solution because this will help prepare students to pass the CAHSEE.
Another solution is the students pay attention in the classes, first the students pay attention more in the classes, they cannot play in the classes and the teachers talk more with them.
Another solution is the students need practice more the English, first the teacher calls parents and asks if they have a computer and internet, if they do, the teacher sets up websites for students use. If they don’t have computer the teacher help then get it. This is a good solution because this will help to the students for learn better the English.
When the students not pass the CAHSEE not would a good job because they don’t have diploma, I think the students learn more about the CAHSEE is the best solution to this problem because this will help prepare to pass the CAHSEE
School dirty did you think schools in clean form your child? First the bathroom look bad and smell bad I sow allots gross things like classroom and cafeteria I was surprise when saw flies around garbage and all over the school, .I no feel good when I see nasty things school dirty is a problem at school the students are dirty there a several causes of this problem they include the people too leas they in not enough people to clean the school the students no help to clean the school there are many effect this problem the include students feel discourages students cloud yet batteries school cant be superbike by at distil .
One solution is the school need to hire janitor first pay for me people ton working in the school someone to talk the principal he need to watch have money in the school this is a good solution because principal look the school have money the principal need to talk the district, the student each truck the garbage talk the students don’t throw trash make signs and put them around the school ,more money for more hire janitor ask for more funding row district when district knows the no hair janitor they are going to give money .
When the school is to dirty the effect is they students could yet batteries the because the students no help to clean they school I think hiring more janitor is the best solutions to this more janitor will be able to clean that capes I think the solution is the school pay for more money people to working in the school problem because the school has in the school problem because the school has more employees the school appear
eduar edgardo velasquez
CAHSEE
Imagine you couldn’t pass the Chasee you will feel bad because you can’t continue at the school and your dreams are going to crush and you will not get a good job. Students who cannot pass the Cahsee it’s the problem at the school. They don’t speak English very well or the Cashee is so much work and didn’t put attention in class, they can’t get good jobs, they don’t graduate from high school, they will work at the field. If this problem is not solved then all these consequences will get worse.
One solution is if you have only been in this country for 4 years or less you should not take the Cahsee. This is a good solution because you will learn more English for p ass the Cahsee . Another solution is read, write and talk everyday at home that will help you to know how write better and how talk with somebody. This is a good solution because it will help you to pass the Cahsee. The last solution is work hard in class and don’t distract at he class this is good solution because you need put attention to the class and getting ready for finally pass the Cahsee.
When students don’t pass the Chasee they will not get good jobs the cause is because they don’t know so mucho English. I think not making immigrants take the Cahsee is the best solution to this problem because they don’t know so mucho English ..
Mexico pride = Michoacan pride
Marco Cervantes.
School starts too early
The time at school should starts early than now. First you need to talk with the principal. Second talk with a person in charge in time. And third write a prose .This is a good solution because the principal can change the time.
Students sleep earlier. First they need to practice to sleep earlier. Second they need to finish their homework first, and then they need to get to sleep. Third play less. This is a good solution because when you need to wake up in the morning you’re not late for school.
I think students should get an alarm clock. Firs ask your parents how to get an alarm clock. Second you need to wake on time. And third go to school in peace .This is a good solution because you can not be late for school.
Imagine you have not waked up in the morning and you are late for school. You’re going to school and you get detention for coming in too late.
There is several cause of this problem. Early start is a problem at school. Students want to eat at home because they don’t like the breakfast at school. Students want to sleep more, they are tire to wake up too early and they are tired to wake and to walk to school. There are many consequences of this problem. If this problem is not solved then all the consequences will get worse.
In conclusion I think to talk to the principal is the best solution of this problem because they should practice to sleep earlier.
The computer to slow
Imagine students using the computers and they have work to do and they have to finish the work and the computers are to slow. There a several of these problems that affect computers. The computers are too old and there are to many. Many computers with this problem s cause the students to not learn that much and they don’t finish the work. If the problem does not get solved, the problem will get worse.
One solution is to buy new computers. First find the person who has the power and talk to them and help them to get. This will be a good solution because it can be faster computer s.
Another solution is to buy the memory first find were they sell it And how much deist cuss and figure out how to get the money it is a good solation because it cod mac the computer faster another solution is connect to another network first ask witch network is biter and how much deist cuss and toll the person how have the power and toll ham that wen the students don’t finish the work and they don’t get credit and because the computer are to slow.
I think the best solution is to buy new computers because is faster and students can get crud it.
I remember when I enter Luther Burbank High School and my friend tell me about the CAHSEE and I feel bad because I don’t like algebra but when my friend tell me don’t worry be happy is only for the grade ten, eleven, twelve but right now I have a lot fear because I don’t pass the CAHSEE I’m in grade twelve and I will graduate and my mom is very angry with me.
CAHSEE is a problem at school there a several causes of this problem they include is a lot questions the only one CAHSEE and no is in different languages.
There are consequents of this problem they include effects like don’t graduate and the people feel bad and the parents were hungry.
If this problem is not solved then all consequents will get worse.
-One solution for this problem is work to much with the students and talk about the CAHSEE and latter tock to the teachers and the teachers help the students.
-The second solution is put the CAHSEE in different languages so students can understand because many students don’t speak English and this will increase CAHSEE scores.
-The third solution is to remove CAHSSE testing from graduation requirement because it is too much stress. More students will graduate from high school.
THE DIRTY SCHOOL
Do you usually smell something bad when you go around in this school? Do you see the junks and the garbage on the floors? Do you see the dirty bathrooms? What do you feel with them? You hate it, right? Every day, when you come to school, I’m sure you have to see a lot of chewing gums on the hall ways and the remainder foods were thrown around the garbage. I feel so angry and I think you too. All of them are the dirty school – the biggest problem that we knew.
So, why is the school dirty? The important cause that I know is the school only had a few people clean up the school. If I’m not wrong, there are three people. Another cause is students usually chew gums on the floors and the hall ways. And the cause that I always see in Vietnam and also in here is the students don’t follow the rule in the school. Lot and lots of reasons to the school dirty.
After all of those, what happen with people when they come to school? There are many consequences of this problem. To be certain, some people can get sick. Other people will feel unbearable. And students also feel discouraged when studying in the school. It’s really bad. Everybody can’t stand or sit at the foul-smelling places.
Standing in front of this situation, we must take measures to improve them. First solution, the people have to clean up the school harder, or we can call students (volunteers) make many poster to promote people to clean up the school together. It makes the school is fresher than now. Second, we can get more laborers. It will not have dirty dusts and garbage on the hall ways. Different way, also the last solution is put the rule for this problem in the school. Then, nobody throw the junks or the garbage or the chewing gums on the hall ways. But with a little bit of a problem, if this situation still goes on in this school, then those things will influence to our health so much.
When the school dirty, we can get sick, because people don’t clean up the garbage to show the way to germs grow so much. And I think put the rule for this problem is the best solution to this problem because it will make everybody, whole teachers, students and other people never make school dirty and we don’t need increase people to clean up for school, to save money. So, let’s keep our learning environment so fresh!
STUDENTS DON’T PASS CASHEE TEST
Imagine that you are a new student and you have to take the CASHEE test at your first time in the school. How do you feel when you take that test? Something you don’t know and you cannot pass, right? I feel sad and I think you too. So, CASHEE test is a biggest problem at school.
There is a several cause of this problem they include don’t study in English, don’t practice in project and they cannot do homework. Here are many consequences of this problem, they include cannot get their diploma, don’t have a good work, don’t get to go to college and they don’t have a good life in the future.
Below we will have some solutions for this problem.
First, students need to study more English, study more Math, write the essays and practice them. Let’s study every time and everywhere. This is good solution because when you study and practice more, you can take the CASHEE better, maybe excellent.
Second, I think the CASHEE test should be easier then now. This is good solution because it will not have a lot of people fail that.
Different from the causes above, part of students are so lazy. So, the solution for this situation is students have to study hard, no game, no Facebook, no movie,… to focus on learning. Most of lazy students really really like online to play a lot of games on it. So, the school should hold some small games for students. This is good solution because it helps them many skills to ready for the CASHEE test and take it well.
When students do not pass CASHEE, they don’t get diploma, because they don’t know more English. I think the first solution is the best solution because you can improve your English to ready for CASHEE test.
STUDENT’S DON’T PASS CAHSEE.
Imagine that you new students,and you don’t know everything but you have cahsee TEST. How so you feel to test something you don’t know? When you see CAHSEE book and a pencil in the front but you don’t it,how do you feel sad or happy? CAHSEE teat is a problem at school. There a several cause of this problem they include not do homework,not study writing English,and Snead to much on Facebook are many sequencing of this problem, they in slide don’t have a good word, not get to college,and not have the future.if this problem is not solved. Then all there senescence will get worse.
One solution pass CAHSEE. first students need study.read the book,and they need practice writing.this is solution a good because it come help they writing better.
Another solution more practice. Frist students practing English and math CAHSEE, talk with teacher, this is solution a good because it came help they go to college,and help they future to.
Another solution reading more. Frist they need tread everyday, and ask Smolensk help them. This is solution a good because students go to school everyday. And to listen teacher say.
I think the students need to study and harder this is the best solution to this problem because the students English will get better.their math will also get better. Many students do not pass the cahsee because they not speak enough English,and they don’t study hard.they don’t get a high school diplomata they also don’t to graduate because of this.
STUDENT’S DON’T PASS CAHSEE
Imagine that you new students and you don’t know everything but you have CAHSEE TEST. How do you feel to test something you don’t know? When you see CAHSEE book and a pencil in the front but you don’t it, how do you feel sad or happy? CAHSEE teat is a problem at school. They a several cause of this problem they include not do homework, not study writing English and need to much on face book .There are many consequences of this problem, they in chide don’t have a good word, not get to college, and not have the future. if this problem is not solved. Then all there consciences will get worse.
One solution passes CAHSEE. First students need study. Reading the book, and they need practice writing. This is a good solution because it come help they writing better.
Another solution more practice. First students practicing English and math CAHSEE, talk with teacher, this is a good solution because it came help they are go to college, and help they future to.
Another, solution reading more. Frits they need tread every day, and ask someone help them. This is a good solution because students go to school every day. And to listen teacher say.
I think the students need to study and harder this is the best solution to this problem because the students English will get better their math will also get better. Many students do not pass the chase because they not speak enough English and they don’t study hard they don’t get a high school diploma and they also don’t to graduate because of this.
Phuc Le
Have you ever visit a place that is very weird? I did and I will tell you about it.
February, 2012 when I first came to United States, everything was different. People in United States smell very good. I couldn’t speak English. When I came here all I knew was “Hi” and “Hello”
When I came here after a month I went to elementary school named Matsuyama and the school were very nice and when people talked to me, I couldn’t understand so people that spoke the same language had to translate for me, and the weather very cold and the time were different because the weather were cold I have to where a lot of jackets. The food at my school tasted very weird and I get use to the food every day.
I came to United States and ready for school and the weather was cold but I had to walk to school.
I couldn’t speak but I feel happy because my friends were very cool and nice I walked to my school then I saw my friend and he said “let walked together” and I said “okay” we went to the cafeteria and they gave me a burrito and my friends tell me to eat it because they said it very good and I took a mouthful and that surprise me because it very spicy and tasted very good.
At lunch we went to the cafeteria and they gave me the food name spaghetti it taste very weird because the taste very sour and the noodle are very weird and I went home and my mom made some food for me call spring rolls.
Back then I felt very sad because I couldn’t understand and eat their food and now I feel very happy because I can speak English and eat their food
THE ECOLOGY
How can we make the ecology better in the world?
One day I was going to Guadalajara to go through Ameca there is a factory sugar and I could see all the pollution that causes the environment and then then I started thinking that pollution harms the planet like US and we all have to look for alternatives for a better world.
The bad ecology in the world. There are many causes for this problem, they include pollute the air, pollute the rivers and they put chemicals to land. If the problem is no solved the world then has many contaminated animals.
One solution is the cars should be electric, the steps of this solution are the people buy those cars and don’t make car the effects the air, this solution is good because it help the ecology.
Other solution is the people don’t throw garbage, the steps are the people should be responsible and the people trash in the ride place, this solution is good because is better to the world and humans.
And other solution is the people cut less trees in the world, one step is that can be a law and other step is give punishment to the people who does, this solution is good because has more air in the planet.
The bad ecology has contaminated animals because the people don’t think well.
I think the people don’t throw garbage is the best solution to this problem because they don’t throw garbage they do less pollution.
Paola Lizette pena ramos
I liked many things about your essay. I liked the solutions because is good learned about solutions. I also liked the best solution because we have to do it.
I liked several things about your essay. I liked the way you express you self because you try you best on the essay . I also like the solution for you problem
I liked several/many/two/three things about your essay. I liked many _many things because it is good solution. I also liked my solution because _is about students.
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marwa furmoli
I liked several things about your essay. I liked all of your solutions because they all good. I also liked it because we have to do it.
People didn’t go school
That one day my friend didn’t do his homework and he has trouble for not doing his work. The problem is that they didn’t do their work in class. There are many cause for this problem. They included the work in class. If the teacher couldn’t help their student in class then student would not listen to their teacher or else they will not learn anything at all.
The solution 1 teacher should go around and check if anyone need help on their work. The step of this solution is that the teacher past out paper and ask each person at a time and see if anyone need help. Or go to each person in class and help them on their work. The pros of this solution (Why it is good solution) it’s good because it’s could get them smart and it could help them a lots. It’s a good idea to help them learn.
The solution 2 teacher should call home and talk to their parent. The step of solution the teacher should get their phone number first. Teacher call home and talk to their parent about what they do in class. Pros of this solution (Why it is good solution) so student can learn more in the class.
The solution 3 some student didn’t understand and did not ask for help from the teacher. The step of solution they don’t care about the works they have to do in class. They should ask the teacher to help them if they don’t know anything or don’t understand anything. Pros of this solution (Why it is good solution) this solution is good because if the teacher help them they’ll learn faster and better learning.
I think solution 1 is the best solution to this problem because if the teacher check and help their student they’ll be happy to learn and listen to their teacher.
Chang Thao
F2
I liked several things about your essay. I liked the way you express you self because you try you best on the essay . I also like the solution for you problem
I liked many things about your essay. I liked the solutions because is good learned about solutions. I also liked the best solution because we have to do it.
Wake up Everybody!!!
Have you ever gone to school so tired and angry that you want to scream at someone? High school kids don’t sleep well because they are using the phone until 12:00 AM, they work too late, or they play video games and they don’t go to sleep.
One solution to the problem is don’t work too late. The steps for this solution are talk to the boss or don’t go to work. This solution is good because you can go to sleep on time.
The second solution to the problem is don’t play video games too late. Step of this solution are parents can take the video games from the kids or have them play the games just one hour. This solution is good because kids can play the game just an hour and they will go to a sleep on time.
The third solution to the problem is don’t be on the phone too late. The steps for this solution is parents can take phone away from the kids. This solution is good because kids can go to sleep and they get the education that they need.
The problem is don work too late and the effect is they might get sick and the cause is they are on the phone until 12:00 AM. The effect is they fall to sleep and they don’t eat anything. The problem is they play video games too late. The cause is they don’t have control of the games. The cause is they are in the phone for many hours. The effect is they going to wake up late and they might fall to sleep on class. The best solution to this problem is not working too late is the best solution for solution because kids can go to sleep on time and be ready for school.
cesar orellana
The corruption in Mexico
The corruption in Mexico is big problem a few years ago in my city a person kill somebody and him go to jail for 3 mounts and he come out like if nothing happen everybody knows that he pay to go out fast no body know how much he pay the effect is they don’t go to jail and wrong people go to jail.
One solution is to get the more pay the steps for this is to talk to the president and tell them the situation so he think about it and they don’t accept the cartels money
Other solution is if they accept the money the money they are go in to jail the steps for this investigate and if they got them they go to jail
Another solution is the newspaper they are try to get them when they are getting the money
I think the best solution One solution is to get the more pay the steps for this is to talk to the president and tell them the situation so he think about it and they don’t accept the cartels money
Animal abuse
What is the animal abuse? It’s when the people hit or abandon animals. One day I was watching TV and I saw people, in the news, hitting animals just because they don’t like them, which make me feel really mad, so mad that I was cursing that people because I’m an animal lover and that is not fair, animal abuse is a big problem.
There are many causes for the animal abuse which includes: people think that they does not feel, they can’t defend themselves and because they can’t speak. The effects of this problem are that they will get aggressive, people going to throw them in the street, and they going to bite the people.
If the problem of animal abuse is not solved then thousands of animals going to still being abused.
One solution is cheer the people to give love to the animals the steps of this solution are talk to people about be a good person with the animals. The pros of this solution are if we tell the people to be a good person with the animals, people will think different about the animals.
The second solution is build a refuge to keep animals safe. The steps of this solution are call voluntaries and workers, buy material and build the refuge. The pros of this solution are that if we build the refuge, animals will be protected.
The last solution is make a campaign about the good that has an animal, the steps of this solution are that if we call people, make posters and make meetings and those things. The pros of this solution are that if we make the campaign people will support our idea.
I think that build a refuge is the best solution because if we build the refuge animals will be safe and happy.
I liked several things about your essay. I liked it because I like animals too, I really feel sad when i saw the people abuse the animals. I also liked it because animals will be safe and happy like you said.
‘’Some people look down women’’
In society has to face a big problem about structure and status of the women. Almost of everyday I see this problem that some people still not accept the women, some people look down the women. There are many cause for this problem they include think that all of the women must be like the some women they know, or some women may look down, bad habits on them, or someone taught them like that and etc… The effect of this problem are some women look down on them or other ones, some women bad habits and another… If some people look down women then life won’t be fair for women.
One of solution is teaching people not look down on women, Encourage people to not look down women. The steps of this solution are don’t let anybody look down on women, don’t teach anybody look down women. This solution is good because it will make this problem to below.
Another of this solution is do practice between women and men to equality. The steps of this solution are don’t think the man better than the woman, don’t select side between woman and man. This solution is good because it will fair for women.
The last solution is let honor women. The steps of this solution are don’t decide women just because you listened or heard from other one, don’t look down women just because how they look like. This solution is good because that women may not like you think.
When some people look down on women then they think all of women must be like some women they know because some women may look down on them or someone taught them like that.
The best solution is teaching people to not look down on women. It is best solution because they will remember.
Saline Wilon
F2
Same people don’t speak
English
I am come in this country. and I don’t speak English and I don’t have good feel because I can’t speak English and this is so big problem for me I try every day to learn English in school some people don’t speak English is this a problem there are many causes for this problem they include . Different country different culture and cant well speak English. The effects of this problem community problems and don’t have good future and don’t have good job. Some people don’t speak English than they can’t support him family.
They first solution is they are learning English In the school. The steps of this solution learn English and remember some word and samurais the listen work the computer read some book pros of this solution is good. Because it increases your vocabulary and you can learn very quickly.
The second solution talk to parents for try everyday learn English. The steps of this solution is try to talk English with your home members and communicate with your neighbors and have contact and for with them. And chat in English with them. This solution is good it because
It makes your speak English .and boots up your English speaking.
The third solution is they are need to do homework every day for better English. The steps of this solution is they should perform their homework lave fully and constantly. This solution is good because it improve their grammar and writing skills. When some people don’t speak English than community problems don’t good future don’t have good job. I think to parents for try everyday learn English. Is the best solution to this problem because it makes your speak English and boots up your English speaking .
I liked several things about your essay. I liked your best solution because it make us speak English better. I also liked it because all of you is good.
STUDENTS TALKING
It was one day I was so third and I had headache. Some students talked a lot in class about Some things and they did not listen the teacher I was so sad with them because they were not quietly. They have many causes for this problem. They include of different cultures, busy with him phones and they don’t know good English. The effects of this problem are don’t graduate, don’t pass grade and don’t be strong. And some student talking so much they will not be interested to come school.
The first solution is they should listen the teacher the steps of this solution are teacher talk with them, teacher ask them and teacher advise them. It is good solution because it is important in the class.
The second solution is teacher can call with him parents. The steps of this solution are call with him parents, talk with him parents and meet him parents. It is good solution because it is good way to you can control them.
The third solution is the teacher should always control all the students in the class. The steps of this solution are control them, say quite to students and do not let students to talk.it is good solution because it is good way to be quite students.
When students are so talking in class then students don’t be graduate, don’t pass grades because they are from different countries and they don’t know English.
The best solution is the teacher should always control students and asking them to be quite. It is best solution because it is good way to be quite students in the class.
marwa furmoli
YOU NEVER NEED THE CAR
Last night I’ need a car because I go to the shopping. The problem is people need have a car. There are many causes for this problem they include no many, no listen and do not have a job. The effects of this problem are people walk all people needs a car people feel sad because how to pay for a car, some people get a new car people they don’t have many to buy a car there all people feel sad because
Are need a car. Some people have a job some people they don’t have a job. The first solution people get the job to get many for a car. The steps of this solution is people get the job be carefully in the job do hard job. The pros of this solution because people be carefully in the job
The second solution first people learn to speak English and get the job. The steps of this solution learn English speak English talk to people. The steps of this solution because people to learn English and talk to people.
The third of the solution the government loan many help to people. The steps of his solution to talk meet to government then ask for. Many and get a lot’s of many. The pro of this solution because government get a lot’s of many.
somaya
I liked several/many/two/three things about your essay. I liked three because _it is good for school I also liked to have friends because you can be happy with your friend.
marwa
PROBLEM IN SCHOOL
Why are we go to school every day? Some stunted don’t want to go to school. Why? We can’t answer this question. To all parent of their children you have to push your kids to school, no matter what.
And how did you job this problem? Some stunted come to school and skip class and I don’t know why. But there are many way to make stunted stop doing this.
Right now it time to give you the cause of the problem. And I will give you three…….is they don’t really about what goanna happen in the future…..and they don’t want to their teacher…… and the last one is they don’t want to something.
There are many effect but I will give you three…… they don’t want to focus on school…….when they don’t know something they don’t ask the teacher…… Some stunted don’t want to go to school than the stunted will not even graduate from high school. They have to try harder and harder.
The first solution of this paragraph is…the teacher call parents of the stunted. The step is…. make sure that the number is right. Second solution is…sent the stunted detention room…tell the monitors to come and take the stunted. It is good, because it make the stunted listen to you.
Third solution is…take the stunted outside when the stunted don’t want to do something than talk to them or take them somewhere quietly. It is good because, may be they will try to not talking next time.
I think call the stunted parents it best thing to make the stunted stop. That all I know.
Mancy
I liked several things about your essay. I liked your best solution because they will stop. I also liked it because they will listen and go to school everyday.
How our country benefit from charity?
One day I say some people asking to donate some money for charity. But I say some people didn’t donate money for charity and some people donate money for charity. All people need to donate money for charity. There are many causes for this problem the include, the don’t want use his money for charity but some people don’t have money, the don’t think about the charity .The effect of this problem are the have
Few money. But the some people want donate money but they don’t have money the need work hard to make more money and spend for charity. If the people don’t give money for charity then the conquest is if you don’t solve this problem then the poor people suffer more.
One solution is the encourage people need to give money. The first Step is people don’t have lots of money to spend. Second step is people need to work hard. This solution is good because the people making money.
Second solution is the government tell all people work hard and making money and spend for charity. First step is but the people don’t like work hard. Second step is the government need to pay lot money. This solution is good because people tell government pay lot’s money.
Thread solution is the all people work hard the want make money. Step one is but the government paying few money. Second step is people making more money. This solution is good because the people spending money for charity.
When people don’t give money for charity then the poor people don’t exist for charity because people don’t have lots money.
I think the encourage people is the best solution to this problem because the people spending money for the charity and their country exist for charity.
Muhammad F2
Salma Hurtado
THE BOY FROM VIETNAM
In the story “rule and rulers”, the problem is when a boy arrived to America he came from Vietnam and he didn’t know the language and the culture. However the solution is when the teacher helped him about the culture and the English language.
I think that his classmates and friends have to give him help so he doesn’t feel sad.
My personal experience was when one day I was in the mall and I wanted to ask a person who works there where was the t-shirts spot and my cousin help me.
My observation is if I see someone who need help whit English or whatever I’ll try to help that person.
In the story at the last part Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy because she didn’t have that culture, but instead she helped him.
Sonia Chavarria
“Rules and Rulers”
The Story is about a boy that don’t speak English and he moved to America to a school, and his first day of class in accidentally he knocked the water on the floor and he scared because he think that the teacher yelled him, but the teacher helped him.
I think that is good because he felt better.
My personal experience is when I came to here in was to first day of class I feeling nervous because I don’t understand English.
One day I saw when Miss. Hoyos helped to the students.
In the story Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy. She helped him.
The teacher helps students
In the story, ‘Rule and Rulers’ the problem is he doesn’t understand English, the solution is the teacher helps.
I think this is a good solution because the teacher helps students.
My friend helps students in the story, Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy, she helped him.
Abraham Rivera.
Jose Gomez
Rules and Ruler
In the story Sam doesn’t understand English. The teacher help Sam to better English.
I think that is good solution because Sam understands what people say when they talk in English.
One day Ms. Alma helped me with my English like understand and speak and more. I watched Ms. Alma help to Felipe with his English. In the story Ms. Elkins did not hit the boy she helped him.
Salma Hurtado
“Monsy and Michelle”
The story is about two girls, Monsy and Michelle, Monsy think that prejudice is bad and she doesn’t like other people make fun of Michelle.
I am agree whit Monsy because she didn’t matter about if Michelle was a different race.
One day I was in middle school and there were a special person. He cries because nobody like him.
If we see someone who gets bullying, then you have to help them.
All people are equals no matter what they look like, that is that I understand in the story. The story said Michelle was the smartest student in class so don’t matter the culture to be intelligent or dumb. “Don’t judge a book for the cover”.
The story tell us that we have to respect the people no matter what.
In the story monsy and Michelle monsy Thinks that prejudice is bad she does not like other people Making fun of Michelle because I of her race.
I agree with monsy because she like other cultures.
Last year one day in the locker room some girl was Looking bad me just because I was I could not Speak English I was sad because I didn’t have friend.
through experience I learned that all people are some no
Matter what they look like Michelle was the smarter student in class Michelle was so happy I stood up for her that we became very good friend .
I think that people prejudice Michelle and that is very bad but when monsy talk to her she noticed that Michelle is so smart and a cool person .
Sonia chavarria
“Monsy and Michelle”
In this story “Monsy and Michelle” Monsy think that prejudice is bad. She does not like other people making fun of Michelle because of her race.
I agree with Monsy because she like other cultures.
Last year in my class of P.E some girls Mexicans were looking bad at me and they made me felt uncomfortable. They girls speak Spanish because they are Mexicans but she speaking in English and I don’t understand English.
The last year in my class of P.E to a girl cried because she no speak English, They make fun of her.
The story said “Through this experience I learned that all people are the same no matter what they like.” “Don’t judge a book for the cover page”
Abraham
Monsy And Michelle
In the story Monsy and Michelle, Monsy thinks that prejudice is bad, she does not like other people, making fun of Michelle because of her race.
I agree with Monsy that prejudice is wrong.
In my person experience I have people at my job that treal me bad because of my culture and the people no understand me.
From my observation I have family that experience prejudice and my family have a different culture.
In the reading Monsy sad ‘ I got so angry that one day I stood up in class and shoutxed at the others students.
In conclusion this is important because prejudice is bad.
Felipe
Monsy and Michelle
In the story Monsy think that prejudice is dad. She does not like other people, making fun of Michelle because of her race. I agree with Monsy that prejudice is wrong In my personal experience, I have people at school that treat me poorly because I don’t speak English. From my observation my family is in Guatemala and struggle with
People being prejudice. In the reading Monsy said I got so angry that on day I stood up in class and
Shouted at other students In conclusion this is important because Monsy did thet raiht thing.
Salma Hurtado
El Salvador
In the story she think the problem is in El Salvador there are a lot of violent. The people who live there don’t want to take the bus because always robbed, and they are poor sometimes they have inability to put enough food on the table. The people of El Salvador run to U.S. but they had to across the desert then over to California.
I agree with the solution because in U.S. there are more opportunities but I am not agree because they have to shadows or separation from people they love but if they go to U.S. it’s going to be a great person.
One day when I was in Juarez, I was in smart store and there were a murder and I get scared I went with my sister and mother but they just robbed the store.
The political in El Salvador is really bad, they need laws to respect people and freedom for the violence and the bad people go to the jail.
The article said that more and more people choose to flee to de U.S. and that’s true because they say that in United States are very opportunities to be better.
I think that they have to put laws to quit al the violence. The people might to be freedom.
Elaine Denny she said that in El Salvador there are many gang.
She said the solution is come to the U.S
The problem with the gang and the police, the people come to the U.S because this country don’t have gang.
I agree because coming to the U.S is a good solution and a good thing.
From my personal experience that’s good, come to the U.S because here there are no problems and this country have good people.
From my observation here all is different culture and and the people is good and here is a good country.
From the reading ‘Murder rates driven by gang violence continue to rise, spiking 67 percent in 2,015 over the year before.
In conclusion, the gang is bad and it is no good live in the El Salvador.
Abraham Rivera
Sonia Chavarria’s
El Salvador is now one of the most violent countries in the world. Here’s what it’s like.
Elaine Denny says the Salvador is now one of the most violent countries in the world for all delinquency, robberies and death. The solution of they is of go to the United State for a best life.
I don’t agree with the solution of them because the president need work for your country. The solution would that the president and government of the Salvador will them Salvadorans.
The last year my mother decided to leave her country for that in my country it had future, in Mexico there are very violence, robberies, death and delinquency. I and my mother we come to here for have a better life.
This year came so much people to U.S. from Salvador y Guatemala leave to all the violence of their country.
The article said that every time there is more crime and delinquency lees work and less support because more people are die the gang tied.
I think of this article that they need to have laws to improve their country.
The problems is when people fight in the school and they don’t have the control of the situation, a big now is that people fight in the school, the cause of this problem are and the people weiring in the school and the people think that they are famous when they fight in the school, the effect of people fight the cause a lot problems and I canget suspendect from the school.
The solution of the school has a good talk about problems the teachers talk with the parents the teacher talk with the students about the problems because is no good fight in the school.
Another solution is the family talk with the people and with the group and this is a good solution because the people the group understand the problem.
A third solution is the teacher pay more attention to the students the teacher pay attention to the group and the group reflect the problem.
The best solution is that teachers listen to the group because of the group will understand.
Abraham Rivera Gomez.
I remember when I could not and could not buy because I do not speak English. The big problem Is that I do not speak English. The cause are because I do not practice, when I arrive at my house I do not read books and I do not pay attention in class. The effects are if i’m lost I can hardly ask for help, I do not understand when the teacher tells me, they can not give me a job because I do not speak English. I will not become a good speaker.
One solution is practicing words and sentences with a friend. The first step is talk to a friend that can help. Second, set up a study day that my friend can helpi with my English. If help from my friend, then my English will get better.
An other solution is for me to read a lot of book. The first step is for me to go to the library. Second, I need to find a book that I will like. If I read more books, then I will learn new words.
My last solution is to use the computer or my cell phone. The first is to look for an online application. Then, I will use it to help me with my English. If I use the computer or my cell phone, then I could use the application I go.
I can hedly ask for help when I can not speak English, because I do not practice. I think practice words and sentences with a friend is the best solution to this problem because having conversation with my friend would be really great practice and it will help me learn English.
felipe lopez
Racism
I remember when I come here to united states and I remember my first day of class of P.E. there was two girl Mexicans and they speak English and Spanish, I needed help because I needed tell something to my teacher of P.E. an I said a the two girls Mexicans than I needed help, and they said “we don’t speak Spanish sorry” however they yes spoke Spanish but they not wanted to help me, they’re racist.
A big problem now is the racism. The cause of this problem are than people don’t like To recognize its origin and create more than others persons and because racism began too long time with the slaves and now it’s time want to try to have us as before but no longer can.
The effects of not reading at home are it can than people to get angry, to cause of that exist the violence here in united stated and triggers a network of problems, ranging from physical or verbal abuse, even death by revenge.
If the racism doesn’t stop then probably occur a big problem for all the country and possibly also all the world.
One solution is than everybody we can make awareness than racism is no good. The first steps are talk with all the persons of our family, friends in the school and in your neighborhood about than racism no is good. This a good solution because when we talked about than racism is no good.
Second solution is to create an international campaign in all school against racism. This idea is good step for we can stop racism, and we need talk about of this idea can starting in democracies schools.
Third solution is than the police can be trained to treat everyone the same, the police give ticket to the persons than are racist.
The best solution is than everybody we can make awareness than racism is no good. The first steps are talk with all the persons of our family, friends in the school and in your neighborhood about than racism no is good. This a good solution because when we talked about the racism is no good.
Tittle: Bad teacher
Who is the bad teacher for you? From my experience, I remember Ms. Juliana she screamed when I was doing my work. I told her to calm down. After that, Ms. Juliana screamed again at me a big problem now is because they self it’s crazy and I think too that is because they is not good for a teacher and they maybe don’t like work in the school.
The effects are we learn nothing and I was suspended from school and we can have a lot problem in class if bad teacher then the student is not learning.
One solution is talking with the principal about her problem the first step is talk with secretary of the principal, the second step is meet and talk, its good solution because I can help to my friends in the grades because the bad teacher put f in everything work of my friends the principal can talk with her problem.
Other solution is talking with the teacher and make an appointment and talk to her to let her know how I feel its good because you can save the work and help her to was good teacher
the other solution my mom call the principal the first step is call to my mom and I explain her what happened its good solution because her know what happened.
The best solution is talking with the principal and solve the problem because he is the boss.
By: Jose Gomez
Climate change
Do you know that the melting ice in the arctic due to climate change ? This is a big problem in the world. It is related to global warming. There are a lot of reason for this problem, but the big reason is pollution by human. Human need climate for living but they are destroying it slowly. If the problem isn’t solved, human would be dead because of air pollution and angry of nature like storm, earthquake, tsunami, etc.
My first solution is stop deforestation. Every year, 33 million acress of forest are cut down. The represent 20 percent of human made green house gas emissions and a source that could be avoid relatively easily. The amazon and other forest are not just the lung of the earth, they may also be humanity’s best short term hope for limiting climate change. I think it is a good solution because if the earth had no tree, human could be dead.
The second solution is local city action. In fact, cities around the world are reducing CO2 to the earth. CO2 make the earth polluted and make climate change. CO2 also make temperature high. In 200, six states in the northeastern US lauched a regional via the use of alternative sources and energy-efficiency programs. I think is it a good solution because if we don’t stop reducing CO2 we would have no 02 for living.
The third solution is stop littering public places. Littering will affect the environment and cause environmental pollution. That is because the lack of human consciousness. There are so many countries have lauched this solution like Singapore, Thailand, etc. I think it is a good solution because if we keep littering, the earth could be dead and we couldn’t live anymore.
So climate change is a big problem in the world. I think stopping deforestation is the best solution to solve this problem because everything in this world need 02 for living and 02 came from trees, trees can clean air and make animal and human living. If human destroy all trees in this earth, climate will be changed and became the end of the world.
How to Stop Fighting With Your Brother or Sister
It is a fact that they want to mess with you but you don’t want to mess with them and you hate it.You are the youngest of them and this is a problem because you hate being youngest instead of being older.If you see they are fighting each other then back away and go to your room,stay in there.
My first solution is that talk to your sibling and have serious talk.First,let them speak first and then you can talk when they are done talking.Then,he/she may feel obliged to fully listen to you when it’s your turn to speak.It’s best that you know what you’ve been doing wrong.It’s your own fault that start the fight and sibling cannot get along.
My second solution is that “we”means the two of you will work together on this.The two of you have to work together as a team and it has to be fair because whoever started first have to apologize and then the other apologize to them.If you feel that your relationship isn’t strong enough to handle two or three areas,stick to one if necessary.However,don’t procrastinate in handling the other areas.
My third solution is that you and your sibling will feel more supported and encouraged by each other.Don’t focus on the negative points.Rather,look past them.At least your sibling is striving to improve in that area.Focus on other area while maintaining the strong areas to make them even stronger.
Ask your parents for advice and see what they can do to help strengthen the relationship between you and your sibling.Do not tattle on your sibling and pin the blame him/her because that will show how immature your are.Plus,your sibling will feel hurt and that may worsen the conditions of your relationship with him/her.Do something nice for your sibling without reason.
Refugees
Where have the refugees? Where can the refugees go? UN figures show that more than 65 million people have been forced to leave their homes worldwide due to war and other factors, and 21.3 million of them are refugees. Where are other refugees go? This is a big problem, because the issue of refugee reception has triggered a series of disputes in many countries. If this problem doesn’t get fixed, then many refugees will die.
My first solution is refugee distribution programs in each country. This solution
including refugee’s residence, job, food, and school. This solution is good,
because it can help refugees to get a new life.
My second solution is termination of the Syrian war. Termination of the war
requires the support of other countries and help the Syrian government to solve
the problem of terrorist organizations. Because these refugees a lot from
Syrian.
My last solution is set up offices in Africa and the Middle East to deal with asylum applications. The president of the council of Europe, Tusk, called for “the setting up of reception in areas close to war to deal with all asylum applications”. Because this will help reduce people crossing and die in the Mediterranean illegally.
If we don’t fix refugee problem, the setting up of reception centers in areas refugee mortality will increase.I think termination of the Syrian war is a best solution, because it could prevent the number of refugees and many refugees can come back those country. Now the refugees number is increasing around the world, we should be doing something to help them and don’t looking on with folded arms.
Price of College
What would you do if you need to go to college and you don’t have money to pay? 60 percent students can’t go to college because of money.
I think the good solution would be they should give the students more scholarship for college first they they should give them scholarship for college and second the student should have choices in choosing colleges any colleges they wanna go they should give them scholarship and finally since the students finished the colleges they can work in very nice place and a better job.
My second solution is they should give them money for lend second when they are going to college they should give them some extra money for books,foods,clothes, n stuff finally the students can go to college and they can choose any class they want.
My third solution is they should give them some money in finance second when the student take the degrees and since they start working students can pay the money every month finally every low class students can go to college and they can take any classes they want.
My best solution is the the ministry of education should support the students.And i think this is my best solution because the students can go to college and they get their degrees
Homeless person
Why homeless person don’t have house? Many homeless person in my country don’t have home because in my country don’t have a lot job and then people don’t have job they don’t have money pay for house.If this doesn’t get fixed, then they hard to sleep and they eat food not full because they don’t have money.
You fine job everything that you can do. first you need fine the job second you have a job you have money pay for house. this is a good solution you have home and you don’t sleep outside.
You need president help you. first the president come to help you and you have home you not hard to sleep outside.This is a good solution you have food and you don’t sleep outside.
Many homeless person need to write on paper and stay on sidewalk.The end homeless person have job have home you not to sleep outside and the kid can go to school.