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First, go back to the comments from last time, and read what you and others wrote. If I asked you to write more or correct something, send me another comment there.
Next, write a comment here, telling me what you think a political ad should talk about. What information should it have in it? Write two sentences.
I think that it should stay the same.It should stay the same because it seems like he is telling the truth
I think you should put about thing that are important. Like john smith and john doe.
I think that it should stay the same.It should stay the same because it seems like he is telling the truth.
I think they should tell the true.I think john smith lies on you do not know he kicks kids for a living.
It should have there name. They should all so have what they are running for. They should also have a poster that said ever of them like are school.
They should have there name and what your running for. You are also suppose to have who you are why your running.
I think the story should have how John Doe is mean. It should also have how John Smith is nice.
the should fell like to help other people. they should feel like they will help their country.
I think a political ad should talk about what really happened when they ran for office.It should also say what are they running for.I don’t know what I am talking about.
A political ad should talk about the truth. So that way your viewers will know the truth. Than that way you can change your ways and get more people watching your show.
I feel that John Smith is a loving person and he cares for people.I John Doe hates people and he just want to do what ever he wants to do.Yeah, because he you can tell that John Doe is just so mean.I will vote for John Smith.
They should tell the true.If they tel the true they could get more vote.
It should have the truth about the people who are running for office. Also they shouldn’t lie about the other people who are running for office.
You should talk bout yourself. You should also have why your running and what your running for.
I think it should have write the truth because lies don’t make it better. So tell the truth so you don’t get in a big trouble and get punish.
I think it should have the truth because lies don’t make things better.So they should tell the truth and the show is a lie.
I thinck I wil vote for jonh smith.
They should tell the truth because it is mean to say that just because you want to win.That could lead to trouble.
I WANT THE TRUTH BUT NOT LIES BECAUSE MAYBE JOHN SMITH IS THE EVIL ONE NOT JOHN DOE. ANOTHER REASON WHY I WANT THE TRUTH BECAUSE YOU WILL NOT KNOW WHO IS EVIL OR NOT.
vote me bacause for clan bath rooms.