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Here are the ads we watched:
“Daisy”
Ice Cream Cone
We Will Bury You
Children/Achievements
The Real Threat
Changing World
Please answer these questions:
Tags: ads·competition·cooperation·election·politics
they are mean that they try to kill people
they try to win
They try to win the war.They are trying to make motion.
i think the people are realy wrong. and they are wrong.
I think it is not cool. They are using kids to win.
the one with the girl is emotionle
I think it is not cool. they are being mean to kids.
They yous ads that have children in it because they think that children are quite.No
the first show was evil is not k :[ why would people do that that thats real evil.second is k :] it was good kinda but still mean saying all that soft .
I think they used children because it would get a bigger affect on people. I think that they are making an add based on emotion.
I think they use children because they think they will look cute on camera. I think if you take out the children people won’t think that the opponent is caring. I think the opponent is thinking that if they use children they will vote for him as president.
They think the children are cute. No it wouldn’t be the same because if theres no children there won’t be any school.
They are cute and get more attention.I think they are making a add.
I think they think those kids are cute but they’re not.I think they would be the same because they can use other things, and they are not they don’t tell the truth.
I think that they think that those kids are cute but there not they are ugly.I think they are trying to learning and they might not know that they are eating bad stuff.
evil show was not cool but people like us don’t like it it was evil to us not cool.second one was kinda k it was not that bad as the first one.
People use children because they want it to attract them.
If they don’t have children their land will get taken by people.
To show emotion to people.
People use children because they want it to attract them. If they don’t have children their land will be in trader.
IThey use children becaues they aer cute.
I think they used children because they are cute and adorable. The ad would not be the same because they would not worry a lot .
They use children because they are so cute.No it would not be interesting to me no more.That would be a disaster.
I think that they use children because they are loving and cute .So they can do things like cute stuff that adults can’t do.That is why they use children.
To show something.No it is not the same without children.It is based on emotion.
I think they put kids because they are adorable.I think the ad would not make a point.
Man, this this is a pain in the butt. I don’t know what to do all about presidents.Like barrack want to be president.