After watching the video, what have you learned about John Smith and John Doe? Please write a comment with three sentences. One sentence should tell me what you learned about John Smith, one sentence will tell me what you learned about John Doe, and the last sentence will tell me whether you believe what you were told, and why you have that opinion.
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I DO NOT BELIVE THAT STUFF
Please don’t use ALL CAPS, because that is shouting. Also, write more. You needed three sentences.–Ms. Mercer
John smith believes in god since he’s a worker.But John doe like to kick people and its is his thing to do.I don’t know who to choose but I choose john smith.
I think i will vote for john smith.
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I think John Smith is a very very nice person. I think John Doe is a very very bad person. I think John Smith is making up the story about John Doe.
I will vote for john smith. He is cool. He will be nice
I feel that John Smith is a loving person and he cares for people.I John Doe hates people and he just want to do what ever he wants to do.Yeah, because he you can tell that John Doe is just so mean.
i vote for john smith.John do is mean
I learned that John Smith is a nice guy so people should vote for him.I learned that John Doe is a bad guys he kicks kids.I believe that what they told me was true and I have that opinion because i
I do not believe it because it,s not true. Ithink he,s not mene. I will vote for john doe.
John smith was an angel and he was a nice guy he helped people when they needed help.john doe he is evil and when he see somebody he kicks them i don’t know
john smith look nice. john doe is bad. john smith look like he is lying
john smith was a angel and helps people.John doe was a evil man he kicked people.I don’t believe what it said they make stuff up to make them vote for him.
I think that Smith is a nice person. I think that Doe kicks kids for a living. I don’t believe a word they say.
John Smith is nice,kind,and helpful. He is like an angle to them.
John Doe is mean. He don’t help people and don’t care about nature. he kicks people’s butt.
I thot jonsmith is nics . And jane doe is meen.
John smith a nice person they stay he a good person that likes dog,cats,bunny’s, and he take care of the homeless and they stay hes a worker for god thats the nice boy vote for him. John doe is a evil boy that kick boys,girl for a living hes a bad kid he whats people to vote for him for he can make this place CanadA
John Smith was a good man.John Doe he was a evil.I ting not because he die a long time ago
I learn that John Smith is a good boy. John Doe is a evil boy! I don’t believe that it is true because John Smith might be lying about himself.
John Smith was a good man.John Doe he was a evil.I ting not because he die a long time ago.
I learned that john smith is bad because he helps animals. and john doe is good because he kicks but. i think this is not real.
I learned that John Smith is a nice guy. I learned that John Doe is a mean guy. I believe no one.
John smith is nice and helper when i saw the video it he look like a angle and he cares of others . john doe is and evil boy and a bad kid that gust think for his self and not for others. i do because some boys can be like john doe and some can be like john smith.
I think John Smith is very very nice guy. I think John Doe is a very bad guy. I think John Smith made up that story
I have learned that john Smith is a nice guy.Next I learned that john Doe is not a nice guy.I do not believe what John Smith said because John Smith is just making a show for people to watch so they will vote for him on sent
John smith was an angel and nice. John doe was mean and kicks people. I don’t believe in that they just lie to get your vote.
I learned about John Doe, and John Smith.John Smith was a good man.John Doe was a evil bad man.I will vote for John Smith.The End
John Smith is nice. John Doe kicks kids for a living. I think it is not true.
I learned that John Smith is kind. I learned that John Doe is evil. I do not believe what they said because nobody can be that nice.
I think John Smith is nice. I think John Doe is mean. I think they are telling the truth.
John Smith was a good man.John Doe he was a evil.I thing not because he die a long time ago.
I think i will vote for john smith. I think john doe is bad.
i do not believe this stick finger .it is all fake an he is not a angel.
I feel that John Smith is a loving person and he cares for people.I John Doe hates people and he just want to do what ever he wants to do.Yeah, because he you can tell that John Doe is just so mean.I will vote for John Smith
I like daisies comet because she explaines how john doe is mean and john smith is nice
I thought that you’ve change ms. mercer but you’ve didn’t so I you’ve think about it.from today I am going to be like slave I’m my own ways.And there should be a new website better than your boring websites like live search,emerald games,and mix wit.