This week, we will be review last week’s comments about risk. Read this post, then click on the link at the bottom to review last weeks comments, and my comments on them.
Here are some general points…
- Make sure you are putting only one space between words, not two or three.
- Have capital letters at the start of each sentence, and periods at the end. Leave a space after periods.
- DO NOT USE CAPS LOCK OR WRITE IN ALL CAPS! That is shouting and it’s rude.
- Some of you just put things like “A good risk is good, a bad risk is bad.” I need examples, that is just restating the question.
- Some folks thought doing homework or schoolwork is risky. I agree that it can be. When is doing your classwork or homework taking a risk?
- Other thought being good, or helping the poor, or others was a risk. What can be risky about doing that?
- Some of you gave examples of saving someone’s life. Are there smaller risks that you can take that are also important?
Read last week’s comments, then leave a comment here about what you read or respond to what I said.
I really liked your comment thank you very much. I really enjoyed reading Mrs.Mercer.Did I tell you that when we found my brother he was crying.
IT is good because you will get sometiming.
doing your homework is good for you because you learn more. not doing your homework is bad because you don’t learn nothing.
Some times when you help somebody to stand up they could just push you so sometimes you have to be carefull.
doing your work is good.because it help you in the star test.if you don’t do your work you will flunk the star test.
I like risking my life for my little baby sister .Sometime my other sister drown I risk my life for her .
I look at the comments and it was good.It was a bad risk to change the states around.It was a good risk to go where they they are sopoes to go.
I like Javie. His were very good
I took a good risk by playing hide an go seek because I did know how to play that is a good risk. I did a bad risk by doing the monkey bars and I fell down.
I look at the comments and it was good.It was a bad risk to change the states around.It was a good risk to go where they are sopoes to go.
Mrs . Mercer it is a bad risk because you could get hit.Had you ever tried a risk.
Colby that was interesting. I like how you spent time with your dad.
I am commenting to ziomara.I like your writing.
I am commenting to ziomara.I like your writing.
Abigail I love your risk about saving your uncle. It was good that you help your uncle.
Yeng I really like your sentence espiecially about that bad risk
Dear my friend I like your story it interesting and it was hard you said. And your story was sad and exiting and it is was a very hard thing to do .
love your friend dayana
my dad was taking a bad risk and he did it and he got hurt and he never took a bad risk again.
One time my brother ripped his homework that was a bad risk.Then a good risk is when my brother turned his homework in.
Lija i like your comment. When you said that you help friend
Hey Lisa I just love your comment.Your comment is very very interesting.So how did you think of it?
Helping people is a good risk. Not listening to the teacher is a bad risk.
Hey Destiny G your comment is very thoughtful and caring.
DEAR MONTI A. I LIKED YOUR STORY DOING YOUR HOME WORK
My goal is to not get sent home because of Coby.My goal is to be the best student I can be.