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Write two sentences about a good risk that you or another person might take. Something where you would be risking failure, but where something good would happen if you succeed.
Tagged: consequences, risk
36 responses so far ↓
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sabrina
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:10 am
A good risk to take is when you try something knew that your not good at or your scared of it …..
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Nathan
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:10 am
A good risk is that if you try something new.
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Lee T.
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:11 am
A risk that you could take is when you don’t know how to do something like spelling.
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Ricky
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:11 am
A risk is something that is impossible and something that is new.
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Sheng.T
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:11 am
a good risk is when you try something you never do or your not good at
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giancarlo
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:12 am
A good risk I could take Is making new friends.
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Luther
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:12 am
A good risk I could take Is making new friends
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Lai S.
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:12 am
I would take a risk to how to skate.
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alexis
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:13 am
I would take a risk by going to the doctor to get a shot
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mashiya
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:13 am
I would take a risk by going to the doctor to take a shot.
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Stephanie M.
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:13 am
A risk I took was when I got a new pet I didn’t know what to do.
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Yessenia
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:14 am
I took a risk by riding a two wheel bike on the cement. I would also take a risk by camping in the woods.
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Brittny S.
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:14 am
I would take a risk of going to my friends house when I never went there.
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marcos
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:14 am
I take a risk to ride my bike all the way to home and to school.
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sebastian
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:15 am
A risk I could take is useing roller skates.
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alex.h
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:15 am
I think that those are some good risk and a risk I would take is like let’s say that there was a party and they were going to go skating and I was afraid to go and I go and i fall and all the people there all start to be mean and start to giggle and I get up and I try again and I don’t fall and I just learned how to skate and I keep skating and I just learned how to skate.
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jerrid
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:15 am
I took a risk of skydiving out of a airplane. An other one is when I was about to fall of a bridge.
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dmian
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:16 am
A good risk is make more friends.
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Desiree
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:20 am
I thing a good risk is to make new friends come to your birthday party
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melinda
// Oct 7, 2009 at 9:22 am
A good risk to take is to try it.
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kylev
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:38 pm
Its a risk because if you mess up people will laugh at you.also you will be sometimes scared of your fears.
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Alexis
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:38 pm
A good risk is like going to a spelling bee. and that is what a good risk can be.
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Caira
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:42 pm
If I was learning how to skateboard and I fall.Would people be laughing at me? But I didn’t my sister helped me.
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Tae' W.
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:42 pm
A good risk is like you know how to do something and then you try and he next thing you know you got it.
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davion
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:43 pm
somebody like say you stink and somebody defend you
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alberto
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:43 pm
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Kendra
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:44 pm
A good risk is to help a old lady.
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jacky
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:45 pm
a good risk is when your friend tells you something and you don’t tell no one else.
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jerry t
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:46 pm
I risk my friend that is nice to me his name is Alfredo
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Alanna
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:46 pm
A good risk is to help people.
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Angelina E.
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:47 pm
If I took a risk I would help a person across the street and I would also tooter people everyday.
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Manuel
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:48 pm
I took a rick helping my mom.
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Alfonso L.
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:49 pm
A RISK IS A GOOD thing.
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Ant
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:51 pm
We would do whatever we could do.
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LISETTE .G
// Oct 8, 2009 at 1:53 pm
A good risks is like if I whet to the mall and i came back with allot of shoes .
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melinda
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:28 am
My goal is to study math for the semester.
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