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Write one sentence with a goal that you have for school this year. When you are done, do one of the activities below until the timer rings:
Tagged: consequences, goals, risk
84 responses so far ↓
1
jerry
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:00 am
a risk is when something bad happen
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alexis
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:01 am
A goal I am trying to reach is going to the 5th grade.
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Caira Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:28 pm
That is a good goal you should keep working on that.
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ShawaniA Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:35 pm
@alexis, I am trying to go to 6th grade.
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markisha
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:02 am
In the movie he took a big risk and the risk was to stay home.
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Kendra.N Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:37 pm
I think that is pretty nice .
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Kyle
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:02 am
I hope I can make this school star test this year.
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Caira
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:03 am
A goal for this school year is to get on the soccer team.
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Toya
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:03 am
My goal is to pass fourth grade and to have a great year.
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alexis Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:25 pm
@Toya, I hope your goal comes true
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jacky
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:05 am
dont never tell your parents you dont care
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Lisette . G
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:07 am
My goal is to pass the fourth grade star test .
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Jacky Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:31 pm
Lisette that is a good
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Akilah Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:31 pm
@Lisette . G, good goal Lisette it is from me Akilah
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aj
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:07 am
A risk is win you go out side win your not sopost to
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Xavier Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:24 pm
@aj, that is cool
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tyler Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:29 pm
@aj, what sup bro
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ANTHONY Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:36 pm
@AJ, I hope that works AJ.
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akilah
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:07 am
My goal is not at this school the highest goal I got is at David A weir . My goal was 46.
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Carlos
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:08 am
I am trying to do my best to reach my goal to get in a soccer team.
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alfredo Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:29 pm
@Carlos, good gob
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ALFONSO Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:34 pm
I hope you reach your goal .
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Angelina E.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:09 am
My goal is to make people happy and help people ,tooter people ,and for them to get better at things and to get people to get the highest score.
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tyler.t Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:25 pm
what sup bro what u doing
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toya Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:27 pm
@Angelina E., I hope you reach your goal.
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kyle Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:30 pm
@Angelina E., That is a good thing to help others.
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Alfonso L.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:10 am
I am trying to do my best to reach my goal in soccer team.
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Kendra.N
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:10 am
To help an old lady with her groceries .
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Juliana G.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:11 am
This year my goal is to read well and be more good at math.
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Anthony
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:11 am
I hope that I pass this grade and other grades
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dazhaiiG.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:13 am
I want to try to get a high goal to pass the star test and the bench mark to pass fourth grade.
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TAE W. Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:46 pm
@dazhaiiG., I love you’re comment!
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Tae' W.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:14 am
A good risk is doing something you know and then you do it and you can do it.
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Xiong
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:59 am
A goal for school year is going to a place thay you can see
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ALEX
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:57 am
my goal for this year is to get a good score on my report card and to get a high score this year.
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Cyrano Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:11 am
you did awesome but try use a better word for good.
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Juliana G. Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:38 pm
@ALEX, I think you can get a good score if you learn .
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luther
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:57 am
My goal is to good stuff to students & make good choices to other kids & teachers
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Brittny S
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
My goal is to get advance on the star test.
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Yessenia Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:56 am
@Brittny S, I think that is a good idea because when you have a good star test you have a great job.
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Lai S. Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:00 am
@Brittny S, is the best friend ever that i ever have and she will always be my best friend.
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Lee
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
My goal is to finish my homework ever day.
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Sheng .T Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:59 am
@Lee, o my god =0 you are going to be in fifth=)
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alexis Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:00 am
@Lee, yes I agree with you
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rosa Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:00 am
@Lee, yes I agree with you
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stephanie M. Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:09 am
@Lee, THAT IS GREAT LEE THAT’S BETTER THEN MINE.
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Desiree Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:13 am
@Lee,Hey Lee that was really cool that you wrote there I think that’s why you always do your homework your very good at it but your very smart.
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savannah
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
my goal for this year is trying to be 100%.
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mashiya Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:02 am
I agree with you because i am trying to get the same thing.
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mashiya
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
On tests the goal I want is advanced.
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Michelle V. Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:01 am
@mashiya,I think you could do it.
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alexis
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:59 am
A goal for this school year is to get on the soccer team.
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luther Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:55 am
my goal is to better at math & listening
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Ricky
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:59 am
My goal is to be a good student and make good choices to other kids and teachers.
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Yessenia
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:59 am
My goal of the school year is doing all my tests so I will be good on the star tests so I can have a great job when I grow up.
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Brittny S Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:56 am
@Yessenia, I think you will do a great job on the star test.
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CYRANO B.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My goal is to stay on advanced.
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Sheng .T
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My goal of the school year is finishing my homework sometimes.
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Lee T. Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:57 am
@Sheng .T, Okay good for you. L:)
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Nathan V. Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:05 am
@Sheng .T, I agree that it is a good idea to finish your homework sometime.
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xavier Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:29 pm
@Sheng .T, I agree to
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LAI S.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My goal is to get advance on the star test
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Michelle
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:02 am
My goal is to be a better person in my class.
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Desiree
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:02 am
My goal of the school year is to do better on the star test.
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savannah Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:57 am
@Desiree, I think that to I am kinda of doing the same thing.
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payia v
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:03 am
My goal is to go to school and to do my home book and you can do good on your home book and your school.
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sebastian
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:04 am
My goal is to lisen to the teacher.
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Ricky Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 8:55 am
You have a nice goal.
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Steve
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:06 am
My goal is to get a better grade to the top of school.
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Sebastian Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:08 am
You wrote a nice goal.
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marcos Reply:
October 14th, 2009 at 9:10 am
I hope you do good on your star test. So you can get a good good grade. then you can have a great gob.
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MIRIAM
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:10 am
My goal is to get better at tests.
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Giancarlo
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:55 am
My goal is to do better at math.
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jerry Reply:
October 16th, 2009 at 1:26 pm
that is a great goal
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Damian
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:56 am
MY GOAL IS TO DO AT school
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sione
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:58 am
My goal is to follow the 5B,S
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Michelle V.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:58 am
My goal is to get better at math,reading,and writing.
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stephanie M.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:03 am
A GOAL THAT I WANT TO DO IS DO BETTER AT MATH.
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jeremiah
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:04 am
I like you guss all of you because all of you is great
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melinda
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:05 am
my school is a good place to be at.
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sione
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:11 am
My goal is to be good at school and follow the rules
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ManueR.
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:37 pm
Jacky you ritgh.
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cyrano
// Oct 19, 2009 at 11:08 am
It is important because it keeps air in the siut.
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jeremiah
// Oct 19, 2009 at 11:13 am
SO THEY CAN CILBRATE THE STATE.
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