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Write one sentence with a goal that you have for school this year. When you are done, do one of the activities below until the timer rings:
Tagged: consequences, goals, risk
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87 responses so far ↓
1
jerry
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:00 am
a risk is when something bad happen
2
alexis
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:01 am
A goal I am trying to reach is going to the 5th grade.
3
markisha
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:02 am
In the movie he took a big risk and the risk was to stay home.
4
Kyle
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:02 am
I hope I can make this school star test this year.
5
Caira
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:03 am
A goal for this school year is to get on the soccer team.
6
Toya
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:03 am
My goal is to pass fourth grade and to have a great year.
7
jacky
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:05 am
dont never tell your parents you dont care
8
Lisette . G
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:07 am
My goal is to pass the fourth grade star test .
9
aj
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:07 am
A risk is win you go out side win your not sopost to
10
akilah
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:07 am
My goal is not at this school the highest goal I got is at David A weir . My goal was 46.
11
Carlos
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:08 am
I am trying to do my best to reach my goal to get in a soccer team.
12
Angelina E.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:09 am
My goal is to make people happy and help people ,tooter people ,and for them to get better at things and to get people to get the highest score.
13
Alfonso L.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:10 am
I am trying to do my best to reach my goal in soccer team.
14
Kendra.N
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:10 am
To help an old lady with her groceries .
15
Juliana G.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:11 am
This year my goal is to read well and be more good at math.
16
Anthony
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:11 am
I hope that I pass this grade and other grades
17
dazhaiiG.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:13 am
I want to try to get a high goal to pass the star test and the bench mark to pass fourth grade.
18
Tae' W.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:14 am
A good risk is doing something you know and then you do it and you can do it.
19
Xiong
// Oct 12, 2009 at 9:59 am
A goal for school year is going to a place thay you can see
20
ALEX
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:57 am
my goal for this year is to get a good score on my report card and to get a high score this year.
21
luther
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:57 am
My goal is to good stuff to students & make good choices to other kids & teachers
22
Brittny S
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
My goal is to get advance on the star test.
23
Lee
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
My goal is to finish my homework ever day.
24
savannah
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
my goal for this year is trying to be 100%.
25
mashiya
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:58 am
On tests the goal I want is advanced.
26
alexis
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:59 am
A goal for this school year is to get on the soccer team.
27
Ricky
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:59 am
My goal is to be a good student and make good choices to other kids and teachers.
28
Yessenia
// Oct 12, 2009 at 10:59 am
My goal of the school year is doing all my tests so I will be good on the star tests so I can have a great job when I grow up.
29
CYRANO B.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My goal is to stay on advanced.
30
Sheng .T
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My goal of the school year is finishing my homework sometimes.
31
LAI S.
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:00 am
My goal is to get advance on the star test
32
Michelle
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:02 am
My goal is to be a better person in my class.
33
Desiree
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:02 am
My goal of the school year is to do better on the star test.
34
payia v
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:03 am
My goal is to go to school and to do my home book and you can do good on your home book and your school.
35
sebastian
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:04 am
My goal is to lisen to the teacher.
36
Steve
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:06 am
My goal is to get a better grade to the top of school.
37
MIRIAM
// Oct 12, 2009 at 11:10 am
My goal is to get better at tests.
38
Giancarlo
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:55 am
My goal is to do better at math.
39
Ricky
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:55 am
You have a nice goal.
40
luther
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:55 am
my goal is to better at math & listening
41
Yessenia
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:56 am
@Brittny S, I think that is a good idea because when you have a good star test you have a great job.
42
Brittny S
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:56 am
@Yessenia, I think you will do a great job on the star test.
43
Damian
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:56 am
MY GOAL IS TO DO AT school
44
Lee T.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:57 am
@Sheng .T, Okay good for you. L:)
45
savannah
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:57 am
@Desiree, I think that to I am kinda of doing the same thing.
46
sione
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:58 am
My goal is to follow the 5B,S
47
Michelle V.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:58 am
My goal is to get better at math,reading,and writing.
48
Sheng .T
// Oct 14, 2009 at 8:59 am
@Lee, o my god =0 you are going to be in fifth=)
49
Lai S.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:00 am
@Brittny S, is the best friend ever that i ever have and she will always be my best friend.
50
alexis
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:00 am
@Lee, yes I agree with you
51
rosa
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:00 am
@Lee, yes I agree with you
52
Michelle V.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:01 am
@mashiya,I think you could do it.
53
mashiya
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:02 am
I agree with you because i am trying to get the same thing.
54
stephanie M.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:03 am
A GOAL THAT I WANT TO DO IS DO BETTER AT MATH.
55
jeremiah
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:04 am
I like you guss all of you because all of you is great
56
melinda
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:05 am
my school is a good place to be at.
57
Nathan V.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:05 am
@Sheng .T, I agree that it is a good idea to finish your homework sometime.
58
Sebastian
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:08 am
You wrote a nice goal.
59
stephanie M.
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:09 am
@Lee, THAT IS GREAT LEE THAT’S BETTER THEN MINE.
60
marcos
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:10 am
I hope you do good on your star test. So you can get a good good grade. then you can have a great gob.
61
sione
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:11 am
My goal is to be good at school and follow the rules
62
Cyrano
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:11 am
you did awesome but try use a better word for good.
63
Desiree
// Oct 14, 2009 at 9:13 am
@Lee,Hey Lee that was really cool that you wrote there I think that’s why you always do your homework your very good at it but your very smart.
64
Xavier
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:24 pm
@aj, that is cool
65
tyler.t
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:25 pm
what sup bro what u doing
66
alexis
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:25 pm
@Toya, I hope your goal comes true
67
jerry
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:26 pm
that is a great goal
68
toya
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:27 pm
@Angelina E., I hope you reach your goal.
69
Caira
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:28 pm
That is a good goal you should keep working on that.
70
tyler
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:29 pm
@aj, what sup bro
71
xavier
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:29 pm
@Sheng .T, I agree to
72
alfredo
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:29 pm
@Carlos, good gob
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73
kyle
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:30 pm
@Angelina E., That is a good thing to help others.
74
Jacky
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:31 pm
Lisette that is a good
75
Akilah
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:31 pm
@Lisette . G, good goal Lisette it is from me Akilah
76
ALFONSO
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:34 pm
I hope you reach your goal .
77
ShawaniA
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:35 pm
@alexis, I am trying to go to 6th grade.
78
ANTHONY
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:36 pm
@AJ, I hope that works AJ.
79
ManueR.
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:37 pm
Jacky you ritgh.
80
Kendra.N
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:37 pm
I think that is pretty nice .
81
Juliana G.
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:38 pm
@ALEX, I think you can get a good score if you learn .
82
TAE W.
// Oct 16, 2009 at 1:46 pm
@dazhaiiG., I love you’re comment!
83
cyrano
// Oct 19, 2009 at 11:08 am
It is important because it keeps air in the siut.
84
jeremiah
// Oct 19, 2009 at 11:13 am
SO THEY CAN CILBRATE THE STATE.
85
Alfonso
// Jun 7, 2010 at 9:09 am
My goal was to make it to a soccer team and I made it. In the soccer team and now I play soccer every day now. I did this by practicing every day.

86
ManuelR.
// Jun 7, 2010 at 9:10 am
I did do my goal. My goal was to get a better score on the star teat. So I am happy about my goal. I practiced at home.

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CaRlOsG.
// Jun 7, 2010 at 9:15 am
MY goal was to reach advanced. What keep me from meeting my goal was it was too noisy.

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