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Here is the slideshow with the tips I just shared with you about how to improve your self-control:
Which one of this ideas will you be trying in the next month? Send me a comment.
Here is the video on the “Marshmallow Experiment” from last time:
Tagged: goals, risk, selfcontrol
45 responses so far ↓
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damian
// Oct 21, 2009 at 8:57 am
I need to practice more soccer
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giancarlo
// Oct 21, 2009 at 8:58 am
I need to practice more soccer
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alexis
// Oct 21, 2009 at 8:58 am
do non,t eat the candy
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marcos
// Oct 21, 2009 at 8:59 am
As I
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cyrano
// Oct 21, 2009 at 8:59 am
I wont to have imagination
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savannah
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:00 am
The one I will use is the marshmallow I that one is cool.
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nathan V.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:00 am
I need to practice at soccer because I don’t know how to play that much.
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Sheng .T
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:00 am
some people don’t understand math shirt.
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savannah
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:01 am
The one I will use is the marshmallow I think that one is cool.
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Lee T.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:01 am
The thing I am going to try to do other activities to not think about candy.
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luther
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:02 am
I like to exercise cause it gets you in shape
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Steve
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:03 am
A image that you are eating candy.
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Ricky
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:03 am
The technique i will do next year for self control is waiting for 60 seconds.
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Michelle .V.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:04 am
What dose not make me think about candy is going to sleep and draw and some sewing stuff like my hat to the snow.
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Lai S.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:04 am
Next month on the spelling test i would want get 100%.
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yessenia
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:04 am
I will do a activity that makes me for get of candy on Halloween and the month.
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Jerrid
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:05 am
What I learned is to use imagination for self control
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melinda.r
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:05 am
next month i am going to take a test i am going to talk to my self.
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sebastian
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:06 am
A image that you are eating candy.
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stephanie m.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:06 am
I can take my mind off of candy by playing.
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sione
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:07 am
the technique i will do for next year is waiting for 60 seconds.
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alex.h
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:07 am
In the next month i will do the one when he is taking the test because i can do things and people trust me even when i to dumb to trust myself i trust that i can do it because i am african american and those two words have the word can at the end and i can do it no matter what gets in my way it aint gonna pass me by it aint going throow because i am african american i can do it.I belive in myself even when other people dont but hey guess what i belive in me and i dont care who dont care about me it will change.NO matter what comes or what leaves i belive in myself so you belive in me.
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marcos
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:08 am
As I do homework when I do spelling I imagine that I use the computer.
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Brittny S.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:09 am
I would just encuredge myself and just say a couple qesions left.
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Michelle .V.
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:09 am
What not make me think about candy is going to sleep and drawing and sewing my snow hat to the snow
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miriam
// Oct 21, 2009 at 9:10 am
what i learned is self control.
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Alexis
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:33 pm
I would use a distraction to keep focus
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Caira
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:33 pm
Do not pay attention to people who are trying to annoy you or make you feel bad.
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jerry
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:34 pm
I will imagining when I’m not eating the marshmallow.
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Angelina E.
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:36 pm
Excercizing is good for because it will get you going .
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jacky
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:36 pm
I will give self talk.
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tyler
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:37 pm
I will use exercise.
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Kendra
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:37 pm
I think that exercise was a good idea.
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DazhaiiG.
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:37 pm
I think that marshmallows look like clouds and they are soft and good. I will use imagination.
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Tae' W.
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:37 pm
I think attention training was a good idea because it makes sense.
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Akilah
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:38 pm
I will use self talk.
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Juliana
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:39 pm
I think it was a great idea to imagine the marshmallow was a pillow, I would try that.
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Phia
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:39 pm
I will imagine when I need self control.
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jacky
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:40 pm
I will use self talk.
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Alfonso L.
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:40 pm
I think that exercise is good for you.
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Alanna
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:41 pm
I will self talk
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Lisette . G
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:42 pm
I will self talk.
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ManuelR.
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:43 pm
I think that you can exercise more.
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Kyle
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:45 pm
I will imagine the marshmallo as a cloud.
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Alberto
// Oct 22, 2009 at 1:48 pm
I will use exercise south control
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