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How much is education worth to you? How much more money will you make if you spend more years on your education? Look at this poster and tell me what you see in two sentences.
Tagged: college, degree, dollarsnsense, education, highschool, income
66 responses so far ↓
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alberto
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:01 am
dollars and sense
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javier
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:02 am
if youget more education you getmore money and a cool gob
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Tae'W.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:02 am
Education is worth a lot to me because if you get a education you get a good life.
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Kendra.N
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:02 am
Education is a lot to me.I wont a god education.
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Kyle
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:03 am
I think it will be better for my life.
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Toya.T
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:03 am
As you get more education you earn more money.As you get an education you can get a better job.
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Carlos
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:04 am
If i get more education i will maybe get a lot of money.
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Jacky
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:04 am
The money gets higher.You can get a good education.
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Tyler .t
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:05 am
If i get more education i will maybe get a lot of money.I think I will make a lot of money.
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Anthony
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:06 am
Education is worth learning more.If you don’t you will not have a job.
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Carlos
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:06 am
If i get more education i will maybe get a lot of money.make a good job because i get money.
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javier
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:07 am
and you can get anice house
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Kyle
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:07 am
I think it will be better for my life.I think it will be a better lifestyle.
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Manuel R.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:07 am
A Doctoral Degree you get more money . A college money you do not get a lot of money.
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Xiong
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:08 am
I will be doing a lot of a good job to get my money. I will help people and gave there money.
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Lisettte .G
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:08 am
You can get a good education . And more money .
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Kendra
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:08 am
It is god to have a god education.
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Tae'W.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:09 am
It is important to me because you can get a get a good job
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alberto
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:09 am
it will be good for me if i get one
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Juliana G.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 9:12 am
Education is very important to me because you learn more and get a better job when you grow up.
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Ricky
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:01 am
education is good for people in college because you can make a lot of money.And it is education is important because you can go up to higher grades.
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Steve Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:05 am
If you want money for college,just study hard and get good grades.
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Anonymous Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:05 am
@Ricky, Yes it is good for people.
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nathan Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:06 am
i agreed with you because in college you can make money by studying.
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Lee T.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:03 am
We talk about how to be a aldult.I want to get a good grade and money to.
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Giancarlo M. Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:05 am
@Lee T., I think that you can do better.
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Sheng T. Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:08 am
You are right like all was no wonder you are so smart.
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marcos :] Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:11 am
It’s good to have a great grad.But what job are you going to have Lee.
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sebastian
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:03 am
education is hard to get.if you want a education you should get a job.
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sione Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:09 am
I agree.
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Alexis
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:03 am
You make better money when you add more education. It would be good to get a better education.
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Savannah.H
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:04 am
IT TELL’S ME ABOUT EDI CATION AND WHAT MAKES MORE. I PLANE TO BE A LAWYER WHEN I GET OLDER.
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sione
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:04 am
I will be a doctor.I will make a lot of money.
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Ricky Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:03 am
you can improve on anything to be a doctor and get a lot of money because being a doctor is a hard work so you should read about doctor.
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alex.h
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:04 am
My career is to graduate college and get my degree.I also want to get mt lisence and my id card.Maybe even plan to be a singer a lawyer and a famuse and awesome chef cook.I also want to live in la and have three girls named tae carla and kiara and emma so yhat is four.
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mashiya
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:04 am
i will be doing a lot of a good job to get my money.i will help people and gave there money.
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michelle Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:10 am
You need to capitalization and i agree with you.
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Sheng
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:05 am
We talk about how to be an aldult.
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Lee T. Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:06 am
Yeah we talk about how to be a aldult.
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Giancarlo M.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:05 am
This tells me that i want to be a doctor. I want to be a doctor because i want to help people and i want to make allot of money.
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Anonymous Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:05 am
@Giancarlo M., you spelled a lot wrong you only got the rest right.
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Desiree Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:10 am
@Giancarlo M., That is a really good comment that you did it was really
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alex.h
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:06 am
My career is to graduate college and get my degree.I also want to get mt license and my id card.
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damian.o.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:06 am
This tells me that I am going to be a doctor .I want to be a doctor because they do surgery.
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Lai S.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:06 am
I think getting education is a little hard because when i grow up i want to be a teacher.I want to be a teacher because i like to teach kids.
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Anonymous Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:03 am
@Lai S., you did really good but you forgot to capitalize .
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Anonymous Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:04 am
@Lai S., you should of put my between getting and education.but you still did good and i do know you want your education.
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alex.h Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:09 am
@Lai S.,
I agree with lai because she put a lot of effort and did really good but only made one mistake.
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miriam
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:07 am
i will be doing alot of a goodjob to get money and help people.
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Michelle.v.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:07 am
I am going to be a doctor that make will make a lot call doctor degree.My plane is 2 years doing doctor degree so i will make a lot of money.
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AbigaitS Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:06 am
@Michelle.v., I realy like your comment. And i grey whitet
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savannah.H Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:07 am
What u did right is capitalization and spelling . But something u need to fix is u need to read it and check it.
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AbigaitS Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:08 am
@Michelle.v., I really like your comment. And i agree with it
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AbigaitS Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:10 am
@Michelle.v., I really like your comment. And i agree with it.
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steveX.
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:08 am
Education that to be very smart to be in high school to learn a good thing and be good.I will be very smart.
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luther Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:02 am
@steveX., i figure that u did do it right
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sebastian Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:02 am
@steveX., I figure that it is right
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Lee T. Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:04 am
Yes I think it is true you have to get education to get a good grade.
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Nadia S. Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:15 am
@steveX., I aggre with your comment,but you forgot to put,Education means.But the rest was good.
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marcos
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:10 am
What I do for a job and make money is any thing.Has long I get food and water.
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payia
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:15 am
I think getting money is to work on making house. when i will like to be a teacher.
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melinda
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:15 am
to get a good job.
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Anonymous Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:12 am
@melinda, hi melinda , I agree with your comment, but maybe you can put capital letter at the first letter.
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DESIREE
// Dec 7, 2009 at 11:16 am
Why is education is so it so good for people.Why do people really like education so much.
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Sheng T. Reply:
December 9th, 2009 at 9:04 am
@DESIREE, That is what they like so they can be happy in the good life.
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jeremiah
// Dec 9, 2009 at 9:07 am
Ricky you should work harder and if you do get a scholarship i agree with you it is a good Idea.
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